自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Speak in past tense for past events, make the sentence natural and concise, and give a brief supporting detail. Use linking words to connect ideas. For example, begin with a direct topic sentence (‘No, I didn’t’) then add one or two specific details (when and why) using connectors like ‘but’ or ‘however’.

示例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. However, when I turned 16 my parents gifted me one, and I used it to ride to school and visit friends.

建议: Avoid repeating the question and add specific reasons or examples to support your opinion. Use linking words such as ‘because’ or ‘for example’ to make your answer coherent. Keep it concise—one topic sentence plus one supporting detail is enough.

示例: Yes, definitely. Bikes are very popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient for short trips; for example, many students and commuters use them to avoid traffic.

× No, I don't have a bike in my childhood, but after coming at a particular age at 16, my parents gifted me one bike.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike in my childhood, but when I reached a certain age, 16, my parents gifted me a bike.

The student used present tense 'don't have' for a past time frame 'in my childhood'; this is a tense error. Use simple past 'didn't have' for past situations. 'After coming at a particular age at 16' is awkward; use 'when I reached a certain age, 16'. Also 'one bike' is unnatural; use 'a bike'. Improve by using past tense consistently and smoother phrasing. Suggestions: change present to past for past events, replace awkward time phrase with 'when I reached', and use 'a bike' instead of 'one bike'.

× Yes, definitely. I think that the bikes are popular in our country.

✓ Yes, definitely. I think that bikes are popular in our country.

Using the definite article 'the' before 'bikes' makes the sentence sound like referring to specific bikes rather than bikes in general. This is an article/usage issue related to general present-tense statements. For general statements about a category, use the plural without 'the': 'bikes are popular'. Keep present simple 'are popular' to state a general truth. Suggestions: remove 'the' when speaking about things in general.