自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Give a direct, relevant answer to the question with a clear topic sentence and a brief supporting detail. Avoid repeating the same word and avoid saying unrelated phrases like "I don't follow." If you did or did not have a bike, state that simply and add one specific reason or memory. Use one or two linking words if you add a detail (for example: "because", "so"). Keep the response to no more than 3–4 short sentences.

示例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. I lived in a crowded city and my parents were worried about traffic, so they preferred I walk or use public transport. However, I sometimes borrowed my neighbor’s bike to ride in the park on weekends.

建议: Answer the question directly, then give two specific supporting details connected with clear linking words. Use accurate vocabulary (for example, say "bikes are very popular") and correct grammar for tense and articles. Avoid unclear words like "fighters" and correct sentences such as "I'm enjoy a lot." Keep to 2–4 sentences and provide concrete reasons or examples (e.g., affordable transport, common for commuting).

示例: Yes, bikes are very popular in Bangladesh because they are an affordable and convenient way to get around. For example, many people use motorbikes to commute to work and to avoid traffic. I also own a bike, and I often ride it after work to relax and save time.

× No, no, no, I don't follow.

✓ No, I didn't understand.

The student uses 'I don't follow' which is informal and mismatches the past context (Examiner asked about childhood). This is a tense and register issue; however according to the provided list we classify it as an incorrect use of pronouns/phrase. Use simple past 'didn't understand' to match the past question and clearer phrasing. Suggestion: use 'I didn't understand' or 'I don't understand' depending on present vs past context.

× Yes, fighters so popular in Bangladesh.

✓ Yes, bicycles are very popular in Bangladesh.

'Fighters' is incorrect word choice here; the student intended 'bicycles' or 'bikes'. Also the sentence lacks a verb and an adverb placement problem: 'so popular' is acceptable but needs a linking verb. Classified here as incorrect use of adjectives/adverbs. Use 'are very popular' or 'are so popular' with the plural subject 'bicycles'. Suggestion: use the correct noun 'bicycles' and the verb 'are' to form a complete sentence.

× Even I have a bike now in this situation and I'm enjoy a lot.

✓ I even have a bike now and I enjoy it a lot.

Original has tense and verb form errors: 'I'm enjoy' is incorrect because after 'I'm' (I am) you need a present participle, but the intended meaning is simple present 'I enjoy'. Also 'in this situation' is unnecessary and awkward. Classified as present tense issue. Use simple present 'I enjoy' and include the object 'it' after 'enjoy'. Suggestion: say 'I even have a bike now and I enjoy it a lot.'

× Whenever my sleep sleepy job I go for a bike ride.

✓ Whenever I feel sleepy from work, I go for a bike ride.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and contains wrong word order and word choice: 'my sleep sleepy job' is meaningless. Classified here as incorrect use of the definite article/word choice and sentence structure. The intended meaning is that when the student feels sleepy because of their job/work, they go for a bike ride. Use 'Whenever I feel sleepy from work' or 'When my job makes me sleepy'. Suggestion: use a clear subject-verb phrase 'I feel sleepy' and a reason 'from work' or 'after work'.