自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more natural and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms, and avoid repetition. Give one or two specific supporting details using a linking word. For example, mention how many bikes and why you didn’t ride much. Keep it under five sentences.

示例: Yes, I did. I had a couple of small bikes when I was a child, but I didn’t ride them very often because I lived far from school and my parents preferred I walk. However, I remember riding with friends during weekends, which was fun.

建议: Make the response concise and use linking words to organise reasons. Avoid filler sounds (uh) and repeated words. Provide a clear opinion, then support it with specific reasons and a brief example or contrast. Keep to three sentences max.

示例: They are less popular now. Because electric bikes and scooters are more convenient and faster in cities, many people choose them instead of traditional bicycles. Nevertheless, some people still cycle for exercise or short errands.

× Yes I did, I had an A few bikes but I haven't ride it ride it a lot.

✓ Yes, I did. I had a few bikes, but I didn't ride them a lot.

Errors: 'A few bikes' has incorrect capitalization and article; use 'a few' not 'A few'. 'haven't ride' mixes present perfect negative with base verb 'ride' instead of past participle 'ridden', and the context is past so simple past 'didn't ride' is appropriate. 'it' is singular but refers to 'bikes' plural, so use 'them'. Suggestions: Use correct tense and pronouns: 'I had a few bikes, but I didn't ride them a lot.' Ensure past events use simple past or past participle correctly with auxiliary verbs.

× It is not so popular right now because there are a lot of E bikes and uh scooters right now, so people usually prefer them over the uh, over the bikes, but still uh there are people who use bikes.

✓ They are not so popular right now because there are a lot of e-bikes and scooters, so people usually prefer them over bikes, but there are still people who use bikes.

Errors: Subject reference 'It is not so popular' is wrong because 'bikes' is plural; use 'They'. Repetition of 'right now' is redundant. 'E bikes' should be 'e-bikes' and no article needed before 'bikes' when speaking generally. Suggestions: Match subject number with verb ('they are'), avoid redundant words, and use consistent plural forms: 'They are not so popular right now because there are a lot of e-bikes and scooters, so people usually prefer them over bikes, but there are still people who use bikes.'