自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Grammar and sentence structure need correction and simplification for clarity. Use correct tense and subject-verb agreement, and reduce redundancy. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words (e.g., "so", "because").

示例: Yes. We didn’t have a bike when I was very young, but when I was about 12 my father bought one for our family. It was memorable because it was our first vehicle, so it made travel much easier for us.

建议: Improve coherence and vocabulary use; avoid casual fillers like "and" or "'cause." Provide a clear topic sentence followed by specific reasons, using linking words (e.g., "because," "therefore"). Correct collocations ("two-lane roads", "cars don't work well").

示例: Yes, bikes are very popular in India because many roads are narrow two-lane streets where cars are less practical. Therefore, motorcycles and scooters are a convenient and affordable mode of transport for daily commuting.

× My family don't have a bike, but my father bought a bike when I was about 12 years old.

✓ My family don't have a bike, but my father bought a bike when I was about 12 years old.

No correction needed for this sentence as written? Actually 'My family don't have a bike' is nonstandard; should be 'My family doesn't have a bike' because 'family' is a singular collective noun requiring singular verb in standard English. However instruction 2: Only correct mistakes that met list – this is subject-verb agreement (ID 27). Correction: 'My family doesn't have a bike, but my father bought a bike when I was about 12 years old.' Explanation: Use singular verb 'doesn't' with singular collective noun 'family'. Suggestion: Use 'My family didn't have a bike' if referring to the past context consistently. '} ,{