自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Cải thiện ngữ pháp cơ bản (thì và dạng động từ), phát âm, và câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, mạch lạc hơn. Trả lời trực tiếp bằng một câu chủ đề, sau đó giải thích ngắn gọn với lý do cụ thể. Tránh lặp từ và tiếng ồn (uh, I will). Ví dụ: dùng thì quá khứ đúng (“I didn’t have a bike”), giải thích lý do rõ ràng (“because I was afraid of getting injured”), và thêm một câu bổ sung hợp lý nếu cần.

示例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because I was afraid of getting injured. Although some of my friends cycled to school, I preferred walking or taking a bus for safety reasons.

建议: Cải thiện cấu trúc câu, dùng từ vựng chính xác (car, motorcycle), và nối ý bằng liên từ hợp lý. Trả lời trực tiếp, nêu lý do cụ thể và đưa ví dụ hoặc so sánh. Sử dụng thì hiện tại đơn cho thói quen, tránh câu rời rạc và lỗi ngữ pháp như “drive this to getting for workplace”.

示例: I don’t think bicycles are very popular in my country because most people prefer cars or motorcycles for commuting. For example, many families own motorcycles to travel to work quickly, and the busy roads make cycling less convenient and safe.

× No, uh, when I were a child, I don't have a bike because I have a person scared of injury.

✓ No, uh, when I was a child, I didn't have a bike because I was afraid of getting injured.

'Were' is incorrect for first-person singular in simple past; use 'was'. The rest of the sentence mixes present and past tenses: 'don't have' should be past 'didn't have'. 'I have a person scared of injury' is ungrammatical; the intended meaning is 'I was afraid of getting injured.' Use 'afraid of + -ing' to express fear of an action.

× So that I care.

✓ So I was careful.

'So that I care' is ungrammatical and awkward. The speaker likely means they were cautious, so use 'I was careful.' This matches past-tense context.

× I scare when I drive, I will. I will.

✓ I am scared when I ride, so I didn't.

'I scare' incorrectly uses active verb 'scare' instead of the passive/adjective 'I am scared' to describe a feeling. 'Drive' is more appropriate for cars; for a bike use 'ride.' The fragment 'I will. I will.' is unclear; replace with a clear past-tense statement consistent with earlier refusal: 'so I didn't (ride one).' Alternatively, if speaking about future fear, use 'I will be scared when I ride.'

× No, I don't think so. And in my country people have many car and motorbike so they drive this to getting for workplace and.

✓ No, I don't think so. In my country people have many cars and motorbikes, so they drive them to get to their workplace.

'Many car and motorbike' has wrong plural forms; use 'cars and motorbikes.' 'They drive this' uses wrong demonstrative and number; use 'them.' 'To getting for workplace' is incorrect; use the infinitive 'to get to their workplace' or 'to get to work.' Maintain present simple for general facts.

× Also by so slow.

✓ Also, traffic is very slow.

'Also by so slow' is ungrammatical. Likely intended meaning is that traffic or travel is slow, so rephrase as 'traffic is very slow' or 'travel is very slow.' Use appropriate noun and adjective and correct word order.