自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your response simply repeated the examiner’s question instead of answering. Give a clear direct response (topic sentence) and then add one or two brief supporting details. Keep it natural and concise (no more than 5 sentences) and use linking words if you add details.

示例: Yes. I had a small red bike when I was about six. It had training wheels at first, but I learned to ride without them within a few months, which made me feel very proud.

建议: Your answer attempts to respond but has grammar and clarity problems. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then give specific supporting details and a linking word. Use correct subject-verb agreement and clear vocabulary (e.g., "people" or "cyclists" instead of "us"). Keep to 1–3 supporting sentences with concrete examples or reasons.

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. For example, many people cycle to work or school because it is cheap and good exercise. In cities, bike lanes and rental services have also made cycling more convenient.

× Yes, many bikers have used it because us they have exercised it every day.

✓ Yes, many bikers use bikes because they exercise on them every day.

The sentence has several pronoun and phrasing errors. 'It' is unclear; replace with 'bikes' for clarity. 'Us' is an incorrect object pronoun and is unnecessary; remove it. 'They have exercised it' uses an incorrect verb pattern: we say 'exercise on' or 'exercise' (transitive with 'bikes' is less common), and the simple present 'use' and 'exercise' are appropriate for habitual actions (present tense) rather than present perfect. Corrected sentence: 'Yes, many bikers use bikes because they exercise on them every day.' Suggestions: remove unnecessary pronouns, use clear noun references, and use simple present for habitual actions.