自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Improve grammar (tense and agreement) and sentence structure. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep answers concise (max 5 sentences). For example, use past tense consistently: say when you had the bike, how often you rode it, and why it mattered. Avoid repetition and correct verb forms (e.g., 'I had' not 'I have', 'I rode' not 'I ride').

示例: I had a bike when I was in secondary school. I rode it to school every day because it was faster than walking. In addition, cycling helped me stay fit and saved money on bus fares.

建议: Make a clear opinion statement first, then support it with specific details and linking words. Use correct tense and complete sentences. If comparing past and present, say so explicitly (e.g., 'Ten years ago... Now...'). Provide a short reason or example to justify your view. Avoid incomplete sentences and trailing off.

示例: Yes, bikes used to be very popular in my country. Ten years ago many people commuted by bicycle because public transport was less developed. However, now more people use cars and motorcycles, so cycling is less common in cities, although it remains popular in smaller towns.

× Yes, I have a bike when I was very young, when I was go to the secondary school.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was very young, when I was going to secondary school.

The sentence mixes present tense 'have' with past time 'when I was very young'; use past tense 'had' (Grammar ID 6). 'when I was go' is incorrect verb form; the past continuous or past progressive 'was going' is correct to indicate an activity in the past. Also 'go to the secondary school' should be 'going to secondary school' (no article needed in this context). Suggestion: keep past tense throughout for past events and use 'was going' for ongoing past action. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× I ride bike every day.

✓ I rode my bike every day.

The context is past habit (when the speaker was young), so the past simple 'rode' should be used instead of present 'ride' (Grammar ID 10). Also include the possessive 'my' and the article 'a/my bike' or use no article with possessive. Suggestion: use 'I rode my bike every day' to clearly indicate a habitual action in the past. Grammar problem type ID: 10

× This is a complicated in my country about 10 years ago, there are many bikes in my country, lots of people ride bike to commute and.

✓ It was different in my country about 10 years ago: there were many bikes, and lots of people rode bikes to commute.

The original sentence has multiple structural problems (Grammar ID 26). 'This is a complicated in my country about 10 years ago' mixes present 'is' with past time reference and uses 'a complicated' incorrectly (needs a noun, e.g., 'situation' or 'issue'). Fix by using past tense 'It was different' or 'It was complicated' and include a noun. Also change 'there are many bikes' to past 'there were many bikes' for agreement with 'about 10 years ago'. 'ride bike' should be 'rode bikes' to match past habitual action and plural 'bikes' after 'rode'. Remove the trailing 'and.' Suggestion: separate ideas with a colon or full stop and keep tense consistent; use 'rode bikes to commute' for past habitual commuting. Grammar problem type ID: 6