自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be clear and grammatically correct, start with a direct topic sentence, then optionally add one supporting detail. Use correct past tense and avoid hesitation/repetition. For example, say you didn’t have one and briefly explain why or what you used instead. Keep it concise (1–2 sentences).

示例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. Instead, I usually walked to school or took public transport because my family lived far from shops and my parents worried about traffic.

建议: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence and follow with one specific reason or example using linking words (e.g., because, for example). Correct article/noun agreement and avoid small grammar errors. Keep within 1–2 sentences to be natural and effective.

示例: Yes, absolutely — bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise; for example, cities have many bike lanes and rental schemes that encourage cycling.

× When I was a child, I don't I didn't have a bike.

✓ When I was a child, I didn't have a bike.

The student mixed present and past tense by including 'don't' and 'didn't' together. The question asks about the past ('Did you have... when you were a child?'), so use past simple negative 'didn't have'. Remove the unnecessary 'don't'. Suggestion: Use only 'didn't' for past negative statements, e.g. 'I didn't have a bike.'

× Yes, absolutely. A bikes in my country are popular.

✓ Yes, absolutely. Bikes are popular in my country.

The phrase 'A bikes' incorrectly combines the indefinite article 'a' (singular) with the plural noun 'bikes'. Also the normal word order is 'X are popular in my country' or 'Bikes are popular in my country.' Suggestion: Remove the article and use the plural noun 'Bikes' with the verb 'are', and place 'in my country' at the end for natural word order.