自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Cevap doğal fakat dilbilgisi hataları ve netlik sorunları var. ‘‘I have ride’’ yerine doğru zaman kullanımı olan ‘‘I learned to ride’’ veya ‘‘I rode’’ kullanılmalı. Ayrıca kısa ve doğrudan bir konu cümlesi verip bir veya iki destekleyici detay eklemelisin. Bağlaç kullanımı gerekliyse örneğin ‘‘when’’ veya ‘‘when I was’’ gibi temporal bağlaçlar yeterli olur. Cümle sayısını 3–4 cümle arasında tut ve gereksiz tekrarları çıkar.

示例: Yes, I did. I learned to ride a bike when I was eight years old. My parents taught me in the park near our house, and I practiced almost every weekend until I felt confident. Riding a bike became my favourite way to go to school.

建议: Cevap anlamlı ama dilbilgisi ve kelime seçimi zayıf; ayrıca dolaylı tekrarlar ve duraklamalar (uh) dikkat dağıtıyor. ‘‘Not yet’’ ifadesi uygun ama ardından gelen cümlelerde yardımcı fiil ve çoğul kullanımı düzeltilmeli: ‘‘the government is working on it’’ ve ‘‘they have prepared new bicycle lanes’’ gibi. Daha spesifik detay ekle (örneğin hangi şehirlerde, ne tür şeritler, ne zaman yapıldı) ve geçiş için ‘‘however’’ veya ‘‘for example’’ gibi bağlaçlar kullan.

示例: Not yet — bicycles are becoming more common, but they are still not widely used. The government is working on the problem and has created new bicycle lanes in several cities. For example, in my city they built protected bike lanes last year, which has encouraged more people to cycle to work.

× Yes I did, I have ride a bike when I was 8 years old.

✓ Yes I did. I learnt to ride a bike when I was 8 years old.

The student used 'have ride' which is incorrect because the present perfect requires the past participle form 'ridden' after 'have', but the context is a specific past time ('when I was 8 years old') so simple past is more appropriate. I corrected to 'learnt to ride' to make the meaning natural: use simple past tense for completed actions at a definite past time. Suggestion: use simple past (I learnt/learned to ride) for events tied to a specific time, or use 'I have ridden' only for experiences without a specified time. Grammar issue ID: 9

× Not yet, but our government, uh, working on it, uh, they prepared new bicycle lane on the roads.

✓ Not yet, but our government is working on it; they have prepared new bicycle lanes on the roads.

The original lacks the auxiliary 'is' for the present continuous 'is working', so this is a present tense/form issue. Also 'prepared' with no article/quantifier and 'bicycle lane' singular after 'roads' is awkward; 'have prepared' (present perfect) fits to show the recent completion, and 'bicycle lanes' plural matches 'roads'. Suggestion: include correct auxiliary verbs for continuous forms ('is/are working'), use present perfect ('has/have prepared') for recent actions affecting the present, and make nouns agree in number. Grammar issue ID: 6

× A many city have a little bit, uh, bicycle lane.

✓ Many cities have a few bicycle lanes.

The phrase 'A many city' mixes an indefinite article and plural quantifier incorrectly; 'city' should be plural to match 'many', and 'a little bit' is informal and uncountable here. Use 'a few' for a small countable number. Also 'have' agrees with plural 'cities'. Suggestion: use 'many' with plural nouns ('many cities'), use 'a few' for small countable amounts, and ensure subject-verb agreement. Grammar issue ID: 1