自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your response repeated the examiner's question and did not directly answer. For higher score, start with a clear topic sentence that answers the question (yes/no), then add 1–2 specific supporting details using linking words. Keep it natural, concise and avoid repeating the question.

示例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle with training wheels, and I used it to ride around my neighborhood every afternoon. Because my parents wanted me to be active, they often rode with me to help me practice.

建议: Your answer gives an opinion and some comparison but has grammatical errors, unclear phrasing and ends abruptly. To improve, give a clear topic sentence, then support it with specific reasons and an example, using linking words (however, for example, because). Use correct verb forms and complete sentences, and keep to 3–4 sentences.

示例: I don't think bikes are very popular in my country. For example, most people prefer motorbikes or cars because the roads are busy and distances are long. However, you can still see children riding bikes in parks or residential areas, but adults rarely use them for commuting.

× Well, I think bikes are not really use in our country.

✓ Well, I think bikes are not really used in our country.

The verb 'use' should be in the past participle form 'used' because it follows the passive construction 'are not really used'. Use the passive voice with the correct participle when you have 'be' + past participle. Suggestion: say 'are not really used' or rephrase to active voice 'people do not really use bikes'.

× We're not the type.

✓ We are not that type of country.

The original fragment 'We're not the type' is informal and vague and lacks a clear noun to modify. To match the context about a country and bikes, include the noun phrase 'of country' or rephrase: 'We are not that kind of country.' Suggestion: use 'that kind of country' or 'that type of country' for clarity.

× I know I see in other countries like European countries where they use bikes on daily basis to go to their jobs, to go to the grocery shopping, et cetera.

✓ I know I see it in other countries, like European countries, where people use bikes on a daily basis to go to work, to go grocery shopping, and so on.

Several issues: missing object 'it' after 'see'; 'on daily basis' needs the article 'a' -> 'on a daily basis'; 'to go to their jobs' is better as 'to go to work'; 'to go to the grocery shopping' should be 'to go grocery shopping' (no 'to' before 'grocery shopping'). Also replace 'they' with 'people' for general statement. Suggestion: include 'it' after 'see', use 'a daily basis', and prefer 'go to work' and 'go grocery shopping'.

× But in my country usually see children and kids, even me as an adult, I've never.

✓ But in my country I usually see only children and teenagers; even as an adult, I have never used a bike.

The original sentence lacks a subject for 'see' and ends with an incomplete clause 'I've never.' Fix by adding subject 'I' before 'usually see' and make the final clause complete: 'I have never used a bike.' Also replace 'kids' with 'children' or 'teenagers' for clarity and add 'only' if intended. Suggestion: structure the sentence with clear subjects and complete predicates, e.g. 'I usually only see children and teenagers on bikes; I, as an adult, have never used one.'