自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more concise and use correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Fix verb forms and articles (e.g., 'a bicycle', 'helped me', 'left me with'). Avoid repetition.

示例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle and rode it almost every day after school. Because of that, I became more independent and made many memories with my close friend who often rode with me.

建议: Answer directly, then give one clear reason with linking words. Use natural phrasing and correct articles and word order. Replace vague phrases ('it showed that we are not') with precise explanations and provide an example if possible.

示例: Not really. Cycling is not very common in my country because there are few dedicated bike lanes and drivers are often unsafe around cyclists. For example, my friend stopped biking to work after a close call with a car.

× When I was a child I used to ride bicycle and I could say that it was my favorite activity because it helps me a lot or it left a lot of positive emotions and also it is activity that also my close friend loved too.

✓ When I was a child I used to ride a bicycle and I would say that it was my favorite activity because it helped me a lot, left many positive feelings, and it was an activity that my close friend also loved.

Errors include missing gerund/infinitive forms and inconsistent verb forms. 'ride bicycle' needs an article and 'ride a bicycle' is correct. 'I could say' is awkward for habitual past; 'I would say' fits better. Tense consistency: the speaker talks about past habits, so use past tense 'helped' and 'left' rather than present 'helps'. 'positive emotions' is better as 'positive feelings' and 'also my close friend loved too' is redundant; rephrase to 'my close friend also loved.' Suggestions: use correct articles, keep consistent past tense for past habits, and avoid redundant adverbs like 'also' and 'too' together.

× I could say that riding bicycle it is not so familiar activity to our country because also we don't have some specific lines on the roads.

✓ I would say that riding a bicycle is not a very common activity in our country because we do not have specific bike lanes on the roads.

Problems: 'riding bicycle' needs an article: 'riding a bicycle.' The phrase 'it is not so familiar activity to our country' is ungrammatical; use 'is not a very common activity in our country.' 'Because also' is awkward and unnecessary; place 'because' alone. 'some specific lines on the roads' should be 'specific bike lanes on the roads.' Suggestions: use correct articles, choose natural collocations ('common activity', 'bike lanes'), and place conjunctions/prepositions appropriately.

× That's why it showed that we are not.

✓ That's why it shows that cycling is not popular here.

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. 'That's why it showed that we are not' mixes past and present and lacks an object for 'are not.' Use a clear subject and verb: 'it shows that cycling is not popular here.' Keep tense consistent with context (present general statement) and specify what 'not' refers to. Suggestion: make the subject explicit and avoid vague verbs like 'showed' when referring to general facts.

× This activity is not popular in our country.

✓ This activity is not popular in our country.

Sentence is grammatically correct; no article errors. Included to confirm correctness; no change needed. Suggestion: sentence is fine as a general present-tense statement about popularity.