自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is grammatically correct and directly responds to the question, but it is too short and lacks supporting details. To improve, give a brief topic sentence and add one or two specific supporting details (reason, memory, or contrast). Keep it natural and concise (no more than 5 sentences). Use linking words if you provide additional points (for example, 'because', 'so', 'however').

示例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my family lived in a small apartment and we didn’t have space to store one. However, I often borrowed my friend’s bike to ride in the park on weekends.

建议: Your answer tries to address the question but contains several errors (word choice, grammar, and an incomplete final clause). To improve, correct word choice ('bikes' not 'wires'), use proper subject-verb agreement, and make your point with one clear topic sentence followed by a specific reason and an example. Use linking words like 'because', 'for example', or 'however' to connect ideas and finish your sentence fully. Keep it natural and concise (≤5 sentences).

示例: I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country because most people prefer cars or public transport for daily commuting. For example, in my city the streets are busy and there are few bike lanes, so only cycling enthusiasts use bikes for leisure rather than regular transport.

× I think that wires are not so popular in the country because people do not usually use B bikes for transportation.

✓ I think that bikes are not very popular in the country because people do not usually use bikes for transportation.

The original sentence 'wires' is likely a typo for 'bikes' (wrong word). Also 'B bikes' is incorrect formatting; use 'bikes'. 'Not so popular' is informal; 'not very popular' is clearer. Use consistent plural 'bikes' when referring to them generally.

× As it can be seen in these streets, people does not usually use them unless they are into bikes and they.

✓ As can be seen on these streets, people do not usually use them unless they are into bikes.

Subject-verb agreement: 'people' is plural so the auxiliary should be 'do' not 'does'. Remove the redundant pronoun 'they' at the end. Use preposition 'on' for 'on the streets' and the more natural construction 'As can be seen on these streets'. Also 'people do not usually use them' keeps tense and meaning consistent.