自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Старайтесь давать прямой ответ в первом предложении, избегать наполнителей («uh», «umm») и грамматических ошибок. Используйте простые правильные конструкции времени (past simple) и связующие слова для логичности. Добавьте одно-два конкретных подробных предложения о времени или причине, почему у вас не было велосипеда, не делая ответ слишком длинным.

示例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. I learned to ride one later, so my parents only bought me a bike when I was a teenager. Because I could already ride, they decided it wasn’t necessary to buy one earlier.

建议: Отвечайте чётко и расширяйте мысль связными предложениями: используйте связки (because, so, therefore) и конкретные детали (статистика, примеры мест, привычки). Устраняйте повторы и лишние междометия. Постройте ответ из 2–3 предложений с одной причиной и одним примером.

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because traffic jams are common in cities. As a result, many people choose cycling for short trips, especially students and office workers in urban areas.

× OK, so actually, uh, I don't have any bike when my, when I was a child uh because umm, I can uh bike, uh, I can cycling, so that's why umm, I can bought this bike.

✓ OK, so actually, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because I could ride a bike, so that's why I bought this bike.

The sentence mixes present and past tenses incorrectly. Use past simple for past situations ('didn't have', 'was', 'bought'). Use 'could' for ability in the past instead of 'can'. Use the correct noun 'bike' (not 'any bike' in this context). Also 'I can cycling' is ungrammatical — use 'I could ride a bike' or 'I could cycle'. Suggestion: maintain past tense consistently when talking about childhood and use appropriate verbs for ability.

× So actually, yeah, uh, in my country, uh, very famous, uh, cycling because, uh, we have often late traffic jam in my country.

✓ So actually, in my country cycling is very popular because we often have heavy traffic jams.

The original uses 'very famous' incorrectly to describe an activity; 'popular' is the correct adjective for activities. Word order was incorrect; subject + verb ('cycling is very popular'). 'We have often late traffic jam' is ungrammatical — use 'we often have heavy traffic jams' or 'frequent traffic jams'. 'Traffic jam' should be plural when talking generally. Suggestion: use 'popular' for popularity, place the verb after the subject, and use adverb placement 'often' before the verb.

× So that's why, umm, uh, we try, uh, cycling and uh, we use more these kinds of transport, that's all.

✓ So that's why we try cycling and we use these kinds of transport more.

The verb 'try' can be followed by a gerund when meaning 'attempt' or 'experience'; 'try cycling' is correct. Word order was awkward: place the object after the verb ('try cycling'). 'Use more these kinds of transport' has incorrect adverb placement and word order; 'use these kinds of transport more' is natural. Also 'transport' as a countable/uncountable noun: 'these kinds of transport' is acceptable, but 'these types of transport' or 'this mode of transport' can be clearer. Suggestion: use gerund after 'try' and place adverbs (more/often) after the object or before the main verb as appropriate.