自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn rõ ràng nhưng có vài điểm cần cải thiện: (1) Tránh dùng từ sai ngữ cảnh: "rock" không đúng với hành động đạp xe — nên dùng "ride". (2) Thêm một câu chủ đề ngắn gọn ban đầu hoặc mở rộng cụ thể hơn về tuổi khi có xe hoặc cảm xúc/kỉ niệm liên quan để làm phong phú nội dung. (3) Dùng liên từ để nối ý hợp lý nếu cần mở rộng. (4) Giữ tối đa 3–4 câu để tự nhiên và hiệu quả.

示例: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child. My family bought it for me at a local market when I was eight, and I used to ride it around the park with my mum every weekend. I remember feeling proud when I learned to balance on my own.

建议: Câu trả lời có nội dung tốt nhưng cần sửa lỗi nhỏ và làm cụ thể hơn: (1) Tránh câu hỏi ngược không cần thiết "They're in your country?" — trả lời trực tiếp. (2) Chú ý số/động từ: dùng "riding bikes" hoặc "riding a bike". (3) Thêm một ví dụ cụ thể (ví dụ thời điểm trong ngày hoặc đối tượng) để tăng tính chi tiết. (4) Sử dụng liên từ như "for example" hoặc "for instance" để dẫn ví dụ.

示例: Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country. I often see people riding bikes in the mornings along the riverbank, especially retirees and students. For example, every Sunday families gather in the park for a cycling trip to relax and stay fit.

× I often rock it around the park with my mom.

✓ I often rode it around the park with my mom.

The student used 'rock' which is incorrect for riding a bicycle; additionally, the context is past habitual (when I was a child), so the past simple 'rode' should be used. Use the verb 'ride' for bicycles and conjugate to past tense for past events: 'rode'.

× They're in your country? Absolutely.

✓ Are they popular in your country? Absolutely.

Original sentence 'They're in your country?' is ungrammatical and unclear. The examiner asked about popularity; the correct question form is 'Are they popular in your country?' which uses subject-verb inversion for a question. The student's reply should mirror that question context.

× I often see people riding bike in parks or along rivers with their friends or neighbors, which is a pleasant recreational activity.

✓ I often see people riding bikes in parks or along rivers with their friends or neighbors, which is a pleasant recreational activity.

The noun 'bike' should be plural 'bikes' because 'people' is plural and refers to multiple bicycles. Use plural to match the plural subject and general observation.

× I often see people riding bike in parks or along rivers with their friends or neighbors, which is a pleasant recreational activity.

✓ I often see people riding bikes in parks or along rivers with their friends or neighbors, which is a pleasant recreational activity.

In addition to pluralization, there's an article/number issue: when referring to bicycles in general with a plural subject, no article is needed but the plural form 'bikes' is required. Using singular without an article is incorrect.

× It helps people relax and keep them fit.

✓ It helps people relax and keep them fit.

The sentence is grammatically acceptable, but ensure tense and subject agreement: 'helps' (present simple) is fine because it states a general truth about cycling. No change required.