自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Improve grammar and expand the answer with one clear topic sentence and 1–2 supporting details. Use past tense correctly and a linking word to make it coherent. For example, start with ‘Yes, I did’ then add a brief detail about the bike and a short reason or memory.

示例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle with training wheels when I was about seven, and I used to ride it to my friend’s house every afternoon. Because the roads near my home were quiet, I felt confident learning to ride quickly.

建议: Give a direct opinion then support it with specific reasons or examples using linking words. Avoid one-word answers; add 1–2 sentences with relevant vocabulary (e.g., commuting, affordable, environment).

示例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and errands. For instance, students and office workers often cycle to save money and avoid traffic, and cycling is encouraged in several cities for environmental reasons.

× 'Yes, I have a bike when I was a child.'

✓ 'Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.'

'have' is present tense and conflicts with the past time expression "when I was a child." Use the past simple "had" to match the past context. Suggestion: use past simple for actions or states that occurred in the past (e.g., "I had a bike when I was a child").