自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be careful with verb tense and sentence structure. Start with a clear topic sentence about the past, use correct verbs (had/borrowed/ridden), avoid contradictions, and keep it concise (max 3–4 sentences). Add one specific detail and a linking word. For example, say you borrowed a bike from a friend, how often you rode it, and one memory or reason.

示例: I didn’t have my own bike as a child, but I often borrowed one from a neighbor. For instance, I used to ride it to the park every weekend, and I remember practising balancing on the muddy path. Because I rode regularly, I became quite confident cycling by the age of eight.

建议: Give a direct opinion, support it with specific reasons or examples, and use linking words (because, for example, therefore). Avoid vague references like ‘a group of bikers’ without context. Mention frequency, places where biking is common, or why people choose bikes.

示例: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise. For example, there are several cycling clubs in my city and bike lanes near the university, so lots of students and office workers cycle daily.

× No, I don't have a bike, but I did borrow a bike to my friend so I know how to use a bike and I know how to play it.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike, but I did borrow a bike from my friend, so I knew how to use a bike and I knew how to ride it.

Errors involve tense consistency, preposition choice, verb collocation, and pronoun/verb selection. The question asked about the past ('when you were a child'), so the student should use past tense: 'didn't have' (negative past) not 'don't have'. 'Borrow a bike to my friend' is incorrect; use 'borrow...from my friend'. After borrowing in the past, use past tense for resulting knowledge: 'knew' not 'know'. 'Play it' is wrong for riding a bike; use the correct verb 'ride'. Suggestions: match tenses to the time frame, use 'borrow from' for receiving items, and use appropriate verbs (ride a bike).

× Yeah, I think so 'cause I have friends who have a group of bikers, so I think bike is popular in our country.

✓ Yeah, I think so 'cause I have friends who are in a group of bikers, so I think bikes are popular in our country.

Errors include singular/plural agreement and verb form. 'I have friends who have a group of bikers' is awkward; better: 'friends who are in a group of bikers' or 'friends who belong to a biker group.' Also 'bike is popular' uses singular noun with 'is' but the intended meaning is general popularity of bicycles, so use plural 'bikes are popular'. Suggestions: use plural nouns and matching verbs for general statements ('bikes are popular'), and use natural collocations ('be in a group', 'biker group').