自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Make your answer more natural and informative by giving a brief topic sentence plus one or two specific supporting details. Use a linking word to connect ideas and avoid repetition of wording (e.g., don’t repeat “I had a bike”).

示例: Yes, I did — I got my first bike when I was seven and rode it almost every day. For example, I used to cycle to a friend’s house nearby and practice tricks in the park, which helped me become more confident on two wheels.

建议: Organize your response with a clear topic sentence, then add specific details using linking words and correct grammar. Replace vague phrases and correct tense/number errors (e.g., “They hold races there about three times a week, for people of all ages”).

示例: Yes, biking is quite popular in my country, especially at Zora Park. For instance, they hold races there about three times a week, and these events attract riders of all ages, from children to seniors, which shows how widespread cycling is.

× They are having race there like three days a week, making a race for all different ages.

✓ They have races there about three days a week, holding races for people of different ages.

The student used present continuous ('are having') to describe a habitual event; English uses simple present for regular activities. Also singular 'race' should be plural 'races' to match frequency, and 'making a race' is unnatural — use 'holding races' or 'organizing races'. Suggestion: use simple present for routines and plural nouns for repeated events (e.g. 'They have races every weekend').

× They are having race there like three days a week, making a race for all different ages.

✓ They have races there about three days a week, holding races for people of different ages.

The phrase 'like three days a week' is informal and 'like' is an incorrect preposition here; use 'about' or 'around' to indicate approximation. Also 'for all different ages' is better expressed as 'for people of different ages' or 'for all ages'. Suggestion: replace 'like' with 'about' and use 'for people of different ages'.