自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Jawaban Anda hanya mengulangi pertanyaan pewawancara sehingga tidak menunjukkan kemampuan berbahasa Inggris. Berikan jawaban langsung (topic sentence), lalu tambahkan 1–2 kalimat pendukung yang spesifik menggunakan kata penghubung jika perlu. Hindari pengulangan dan usahakan tidak lebih dari 5 kalimat.

示例: Yes, I did. I owned a small red bicycle when I was about seven, and I learned to ride it in our neighborhood park. Because my father taught me, I felt confident quickly and rode every weekend.

建议: Jawaban terlalu singkat dan tidak mendukung pendapat dengan alasan atau contoh. Mulailah dengan kalimat topik yang jelas, lalu jelaskan alasan atau berikan contoh spesifik menggunakan kata penghubung seperti "because" atau "for example" untuk membuat jawaban lebih meyakinkan.

示例: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For example, in cities you can see commuters cycling to work, and on weekends families often ride bikes in parks.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Yes, I did.

The student repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26) because the response lacks a proper verb and subject that affirm or deny possession. Correction: 'Yes, I did.' or 'No, I didn't.' Use a short answer with auxiliary verb 'did' to match the past simple question. Provide practice: answer questions directly using the auxiliary verb from the question (did) followed by the subject (I) for short responses.

× Yes, of course.

✓ Yes, they are.

The student replied with a generic affirmation instead of addressing the question's subject. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26) because the answer lacks a subject and verb that agree with the question about bikes in the country. The question uses present simple plural 'bikes are popular', so reply with 'Yes, they are.' or 'Yes, bicycles are popular in my country.' Suggestion: match the tense and number from the question—use 'are' for present simple plural and include the subject (they or bicycles).