自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Votre réponse est trop courte et grammaticalement incorrecte pour parler du passé. Donnez une phrase thématique au passé et ajoutez un détail concret (par exemple qui utilisait le vélo ou où vous l’utilisiez). Utilisez des mots de liaison simples si vous ajoutez une explication.

示例: Yes, I did. I had a blue bicycle when I was a child, and I often rode it to school with my friends. It was useful for short trips, so I used it almost every day.

建议: La réponse commence bien mais contient des erreurs de vocabulaire et de précision. Reformulez la deuxième phrase pour expliquer pourquoi les vélos sont populaires, en donnant un exemple concret et en corrigeant les erreurs (par exemple parler du climat, des embouteillages ou du coût). Utilisez une conjonction pour lier l’idée principale et l’explication.

示例: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient for short trips. For example, many people prefer cycling in the morning to avoid traffic and save money on transport.

× I do.

✓ I did.

The examiner asked about a past situation ('when you were a child'), so the student should use the past tense. 'I do' is present tense and does not match the time frame. Use 'I did' to indicate possession in the past. Suggestion: Pay attention to the time reference in the question and choose the verb tense accordingly.

× Many people drive back when the sands come on the summer time.

✓ Many people go back when the sandstorms come in the summer.

The original sentence has several issues: incorrect verb choice ('drive back' is unclear), incorrect noun form ('sands' and 'the summer time'), and incorrect preposition. Also 'come on' is unnatural here. The corrected sentence uses 'go back' or 'return' depending on meaning, 'sandstorms' to express blowing sand events, and 'in the summer' for time expression. Suggestion: Use precise nouns (sandstorms), correct time prepositions ('in the summer'), and choose verbs that match meaning (go back/return).