自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid fillers like “uh” and tense errors (use 'when I was in junior high school').

示例: Yes. I had a bright red bike when I was a child. I often rode it to the nearest park to meet my friends, but it broke when I was in junior high school, so I stopped using it as much.

建议: Organize your answer: give a clear direct opinion, then support with specific reasons and use correct grammar and linking words. Correct pluralization and tense (e.g., 'were not popular', 'we didn't have'). Give one clear comparison or example.

示例: I think bicycles are becoming more popular in my country. Previously they were not common because there were few bike lanes, but recently many bike lanes and bike-sharing stations have been built across the city. Nevertheless, motorcycles remain the most popular mode of transport.

× However, it was broken, uh, when I was junior high school.

✓ However, it was broken when I was in junior high school.

Missing preposition 'in' before 'junior high school' to indicate time/place; correct form is 'in junior high school'. Also remove filler 'uh' for clarity.

× I used to be not popular because bike lanes are.

✓ Bikes used to be not popular because there were no bike lanes.

Original sentence has incorrect subject and unclear structure. 'Used to' should modify the subject 'bikes', and the cause should be expressed with 'there were no bike lanes' rather than the fragment 'because bike lanes are'.

× We don't have bike then before.

✓ We didn't have bikes before.

Incorrect tense and word order. For past reference use 'didn't have' and plural 'bikes'. 'Then before' is redundant; use 'before' or 'then' alone depending on context.

× However I think the bike are getting popular in recent year.

✓ However, I think bikes have been getting popular in recent years.

Subject-verb agreement: 'bike' singular with 'are' is incorrect. Use plural 'bikes' with 'have been getting' to reflect a change over recent time; also 'recent year' should be plural 'recent years' for ongoing trend.

× Like I said, bike lane and bike sharing station have built across the city.

✓ Like I said, bike lanes and bike sharing stations have been built across the city.

Passive construction requires past participle 'been built' and plural forms for consistency with 'bike lanes' and 'stations'.

× However I think motorcycle is still the most popular.

✓ However, I think motorcycles are still the most popular.

Use plural 'motorcycles' to refer to the general category and correct subject-verb agreement with 'are'.