自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Give a fuller response by adding a topic sentence and 1–2 specific supporting details. Use linking words (for example, because or and) to connect ideas. Keep it natural and concise (no more than 5 sentences).

示例: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bicycle with training wheels because my parents wanted me to learn safely. I rode it around the neighborhood every weekend, and by the time I was eight I could ride without the training wheels.

建议: Start with a clear opinion, then give specific reasons and an example. Use linking words like because, however, or for example to structure your answer. Aim for 2–3 sentences with concrete details to make it natural and effective.

示例: Not really; I think most people prefer public transport. For example, in my city buses and trains are cheap and convenient, so many people use them instead of cycling, especially for longer commutes.

× Not really, because I think people of my country often use public transportation to go anywhere.

✓ Not really, because I think people in my country often use public transportation to go anywhere.

The preposition 'of' is incorrect in this context; native speakers say 'people in my country' to indicate residents. 'People of my country' is unnatural. Use 'in' after 'people' when referring to inhabitants of a place. Suggestion: say 'people in my country' or 'people from my country' depending on nuance.