自行车— Part 1 评分报告
对话
Part 1
考官
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
考生
Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was red and blackish. I used to write it every every day around the park with my friends and which is why I loved it so much.
考官
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
考生
In my country, riding a bike is popular, especially among young people. They are always.
评估
总分
Part 1
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
分数: 64.0建议: Используйте точные слова и исправьте ошибки произношения/лексики; избегайте повторов и грамматических ошибок, стройте ответ в 2–4 предложениях: сначала краткий прямой ответ, затем 1–2 поддерживающих детали с конкретикой (например, возраст, что вы делали на велосипеде, с кем). Уберите лишние слова и исправьте слово «write» на «ride», устраните повтор «every».
示例: Yes, I did. It was a small red-and-black bike that I got when I was eight. I rode it every day around the park with my friends, practising tricks and racing them, so I grew very fond of it.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
分数: 46.0建议: Сформулируйте более развернутый и связный ответ: начните с прямого мнения, затем приведите конкретную причину или пример и завершите заключением. Избегайте незавершённых предложений и обобщений. Используйте связующие слова (for example, because, therefore).
示例: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular, especially among young people, because they are cheap and convenient for short trips. For example, many students cycle to university, so you can see lots of bikes around campus during rush hour.
语法
× I used to write it every every day around the park with my friends and which is why I loved it so much.
✓ I used to ride it every day around the park with my friends, which is why I loved it so much.
The student used the verb 'write' instead of 'ride', which is a word choice error not listed explicitly but relates to incorrect verb use; also 'every' is repeated. The relative clause 'which is why...' should be connected with a comma and not include 'and'. Suggestion: use the correct verb 'ride' for bicycles, remove the duplicate 'every', and join the clause with a comma to make the sentence grammatically correct.
× They are always.
✓ They are very common.
'They are always.' is a sentence fragment and incomplete; it lacks a complement or adverbial phrase explaining 'always'. The student likely intended to say that bikes are always popular or commonly used. Suggestion: add a clear complement such as 'very common' or complete the idea: 'They are always popular among young people.'
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