自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is too short and uses incorrect tense. Give a clear topic sentence in past tense, add 1–2 supporting details (what kind of bike, how often you rode it, or a short memory) and use linking words (for example, because or and) to make it coherent. Keep it under five sentences.

示例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle with training wheels when I was about six, and I used to ride it to my friend’s house every afternoon. Because I practiced a lot, I learned to ride without the training wheels by the end of summer.

建议: Your answer responds directly but is short and has grammar issues and vague phrasing. Start with a clear topic sentence, use present simple correctly, add specific supporting details (who uses bikes, where, reasons) and a linking word to connect reason. Use a wider but relevant vocabulary (commuting, recreational, environmentally friendly).

示例: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country. Many people, especially students and office workers, use bikes for short commutes because they are cheap and convenient, and cycling lanes in some cities make it easier to ride safely.

× Yes, I do.

✓ Yes, I did.

The examiner asked about a past situation ('Did you have a bike when you were a child?'), so the student's response should be in the past tense. Using 'do' (present) is incorrect for a past question; replace it with the past form 'did'. Suggestion: Pay attention to the tense used in the question and match it in your short answer (use 'did' for past questions).

× Yes, I do think that because many people are using it.

✓ Yes, I do think that because many people use them.

There are two issues: verb tense/aspect and noun-pronoun agreement. First, 'many people are using it' (present continuous) implies an action happening right now; the general statement about popularity should use simple present 'use'. Second, 'bike' is plural in 'many people' context, so the pronoun referring back should be plural 'them' rather than singular 'it'. Suggestion: For general facts or habits, use simple present ('people use them'). Ensure pronoun number matches the noun ('bikes' -> 'them').