自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Correct the tense and pronunciation, give a direct topic sentence and one brief supporting detail. Use past tense for childhood and avoid extra words. For example, start with “No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child,” then add a short reason or brief comment about why.

示例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My family couldn’t afford one, so I usually walked to school or used public transport.

建议: Give a clear, direct opinion using full sentences and reduce hesitation noises. Use linking words to add a brief reason or example (e.g., “However,” “Because”). Be specific about how or where bikes are popular.

示例: Yes, bikes are somewhat popular in my country, especially in smaller towns where traffic is light. However, in big cities most people prefer cars or public transport because roads are busy and there are fewer bike lanes.

× No, I don't have any buy back then.

✓ No, I didn't have any bike back then.

The question asks about the past (when you were a child), so the student must use past tense. 'Don't have' is present tense and incorrect here; use 'didn't have'. Also 'buy' is a spelling/word error for 'bike' and must be corrected to the noun 'bike'. Use 'any' appropriately with 'bike' in negative past: 'didn't have any bike' or more naturally 'didn't have a bike'. Suggestion: say 'No, I didn't have a bike back then.' for natural phrasing.

× MMM yeah, sometimes it is popular in our country. Umm, but not that much.

✓ Mm, yeah, sometimes they are popular in our country, but not that much.

The topic 'bikes' is plural as established by the examiner's question, so the verb must agree with a plural subject: use 'they are' or 'bikes are'. Using 'it is' is singular and incorrect. Also the pronoun should clearly refer to 'bikes' (plural). Alternatively: 'Sometimes bikes are popular in our country, but not that much.' Suggestion: Use 'they are' or repeat 'bikes are' to match plural subject and maintain agreement.