自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 질문을 오해하여 ‘bike’(자전거)를 ‘advice’(충고)로 잘못 들었습니다. 발음이 비슷한 단어를 구별하는 연습과 면접관의 질문을 잘 듣고 이해한 뒤 즉시 답변하는 습관을 들이세요. 또한 질문에 직접 답하는 간단한 주제문을 먼저 말한 뒤, 필요하면 1–2개의 구체적 세부사항을 덧붙이세요. 예를 들어 과거 소유 여부를 묻는 질문에는 ‘Yes, I did’ 또는 ‘No, I didn’t’로 시작하세요.

示例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle when I was about eight years old, and I often rode it to my friend’s house. Because our neighborhood was quiet and safe, I felt comfortable riding every afternoon.

建议: 학생은 질문을 반복했지만 답변을 하지 않았습니다. 질문을 듣고 바로 주제문으로 대답한 다음, 이유나 예를 덧붙이는 연습을 하세요. 또한 연결어(for example, because, therefore 등)를 사용해 답변을 논리적으로 전개하세요. 답변은 최대 5문장 이내로 간결하게 유지하세요.

示例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For example, city parks are always full of cyclists on weekends, and some people prefer biking to avoid traffic.

× Did you have advice when you were a child?

✓ Yes. I had a bicycle when I was a child.

The student used the noun 'advice' which does not fit the question context. The examiner asked about owning a bike, so the correct noun is 'bicycle' (or 'bike'). The sentence also should answer in past tense to match 'Did you... when you were a child?'. Improve by using context-appropriate vocabulary and matching verb tense: use 'had' for past possession and 'bicycle' or 'bike' for the object.

× Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.

The student's sentence was identical to the examiner's question, so it did not answer. There is no grammatical error, but the student should respond rather than repeat the question. A correct response uses present simple for general opinions: 'I think bikes are popular in my country.' Use a subject and verb for a full sentence.