自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your response simply repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. For a higher score, give a direct topic sentence stating whether you had a bike, then add one or two brief supporting details (e.g., who gave it to you, how often you used it, or a short memory). Keep the total to no more than 4–5 sentences and use linking words like “because” or “so” to connect ideas.

示例: Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle my parents bought for my seventh birthday, and I rode it to school most days. Because I lived near a park, I often practised tricks there with my friends, so I became quite confident on it.

建议: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical errors and is slightly unclear. Improve by starting with a clear topic sentence, then give specific supporting details and use linking words (e.g., “however,” “because,” “therefore”). Also vary vocabulary (e.g., “cyclists,” “infrastructure,” “commute”) and avoid redundancy. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

示例: Yes, bicycles are fairly popular in my country, especially among students and delivery riders. However, there is a lack of dedicated cycling lanes, so many people avoid riding for safety reasons. Because of this inadequate infrastructure, most people prefer motorbikes or cars for their daily commute.

× Bikes are popular in our country but that we don't have enough lanes for bikes so that's why we don't use it often.

✓ Bikes are popular in our country, but we don't have enough bike lanes, so we don't use them often.

The original sentence contains awkward structure and pronoun reference errors. The phrase 'but that we don't have' is ungrammatical; remove 'that' to join clauses correctly. Use 'bike lanes' as a clear noun phrase rather than 'lanes for bikes.' 'Bikes' is plural, so the pronoun should be 'them' not 'it.' Also add commas to separate clauses for clarity. Suggestion: simplify coordination by using 'but' without 'that' and ensure pronoun number agrees with its antecedent.'