学习— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答要更直接和简洁，先直接回答问题（I am a student），然后补充专业和学校。注意语法和发音（major in → majoring in；We’re → It’s）。可以将信息分成两到三句，不要过长。

示例: I am a student. I am majoring in Financial Mathematics at Southwestern University of Finance and Economics, which is located in southwestern China.

建议: 回答不够清晰且有语法错误（started → study; in southwestern of China → in the southwest of China）。应直接说学校名称和位置，并补充一句具体细节。

示例: I study at Southwestern University of Finance and Economics, which is in the southwest of China. It’s a well-known university for finance and economics in the region.

建议: 回答较长且结构混乱，有语法错误（is comfortable → comfortable; it also offer → it also offers）。句子应更自然并提供具体原因，避免句尾未完成。可用连接词改进连贯性。

示例: Yes, it’s a good place to study. Because the campus is away from the city center, the environment is quiet and peaceful, which helps students concentrate. It also has good study facilities like libraries and study rooms.

建议: 表达不够清晰，存在词汇和语法错误（your almost every classrooms; and teach; Teachers need to use this classroom to need this classroom）。应先陈述希望改变的具体方面，然后给出原因和建议，使用连接词提高条理性。

示例: Yes, I would like more study spaces. Many classrooms are often fully booked, so students and teachers struggle to find rooms. I hope the college can add more study rooms or open library spaces for group study.

建议: 回答有重复和语法错误（Yes不必要；since I was not good at mathematics → because I am not good at math; in the in the one year → in the next year; I plans → I plan）。应直接说明计划并解释具体做法，使用连贯连接词。

示例: I plan to improve my mathematics over the next year because I find it challenging. I will attend extra tutorials, practice problem sets regularly, and join a study group to strengthen my skills.

× Yes, I am a student major in financial mathematics and my university is Southwestern University of Finance and Economics. We're located in southwestern China.

✓ Yes, I am a student majoring in Financial Mathematics, and my university is Southwestern University of Finance and Economics. It's located in southwestern China.

问题类型：12（代词使用不当）和8（动词-ing 形式）。原句中“My university ... We're located”中使用了“we're”（我们是）与前文主语“my university”不一致，应该使用“it's”或“it is”。另外，动词搭配应为“majoring in”来表示主修某专业，而不是“major in”。建议：将“major in”改为现在分词“majoring in”，并把“we're”改为“it's（it is）”以与“my university”保持一致。

× I started in southwestern of China and the university is Southwestern University of Finance and Economics.

✓ I am from southwestern China, and the university is Southwestern University of Finance and Economics.

问题类型：6（现在时态问题）与26（句子结构错误）。原句“I started in southwestern of China”用词和时态不当，表达家乡应使用“I am from”或“I come from”。“southwestern of China”也不正确，正确说法是“southwestern China”。建议：用现在时的惯用表达“I am from southwestern China”。

× Yes, since my university is not located in the center of the city so the environment is very quiet and is comfortable for students to study there and it also offer some.

✓ Yes. Because my university is not located in the city center, the environment is very quiet and comfortable for students to study there, and it also offers some facilities.

问题类型：6（现在时态问题）、11（介词/短语使用）和14（量词/主谓一致）。原句中“in the center of the city so”连接混乱，应改为“Because...,”或用连词“so”但要注意前后结构。同时“is comfortable”中多余的“is”应去掉并改为“comfortable”。“it also offer some”主谓不一致，应为“it also offers some facilities”或具体名词。建议：使用Because引导原因句，修正主谓一致并补充名词。

× Yes, sometimes your almost every classrooms are filled with students and teach. Teachers need to use this classroom to need this classroom. So I hope my college can set more study rooms for students.

✓ Yes. Sometimes almost every classroom is filled with students and occupied for teaching. Teachers need to use these classrooms. So I hope my college can provide more study rooms for students.

问题类型：12（代词/指代）和1（单复数问题）以及27（主谓一致）。原句“your almost every classrooms”中不应有“your”，且“classrooms”与“are”虽复数但前面结构混乱；“almost every classroom”后应接单数谓语“is”。“and teach”用法不当，应改为“and occupied for teaching”或“and used for teaching”。“Teachers need to use this classroom to need this classroom”重复且不通顺，应简化为“Teachers need to use these classrooms”。建议：删除“your”，使用“almost every classroom is...”，并将重复句子改为清晰表述，主谓一致。

× Yes, since I was not good at mathematics. So in the in the one year I plans to make more efforts on studying mathematics.

✓ Yes. Since I am not good at mathematics, in the coming year I plan to make more effort to study mathematics.

问题类型：6（现在时态问题）和5（过去时问题）及7（将来时问题）。原句混用过去时和将来计划表达不当：“since I was not good”应使用现在时“since I am not good”表示持续状态；“in the in the one year I plans”语序错误且“plans”主谓不一致，应该是“I plan”。建议：使用现在时表述长期情况，使用“in the coming year”或“over the next year”表示将来计划，并用“I plan”保持主谓一致。