学习— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 答えは混乱を招いています。年齢と勤続年数を混同せず、直接質問に答えてください。トピック文（仕事をしている）を明確に述べ、具体的な職種や会社の情報を1〜2文で補足し、不要な感謝の表現は避けましょう。文法（現在完了の使い方）と語順も改善が必要です。

示例: I work at AIT Company. I have been working there for about 15 years as a project manager, where I oversee product development and coordinate a team of ten.

建议: 質問は現在の“どこで学ぶか”なので、現在の学習状況に答えるべきです。過去の情報を述べるなら時制を正確にし、理由や具体例で詳述してください。文法（冠詞、時制、否定の構造）を修正し、冗長表現を避けましょう。

示例: I studied at a university in my hometown in China, where I majored in Educational Psychology. Although my current job is unrelated to that field, I enjoyed the courses on learning theories and research methods.

建议: 答えは意味が不明確で文が途中で切れています。まず簡潔な立場（はい/いいえ）を示し、その後理由を2つまで具体的に述べること。接続詞（for example, because, so）の使い方を整理し、文を完結させましょう。

示例: Yes. The university was a good place to study because it was close to my home, which saved me travel time, and it had a supportive community of classmates who helped with group projects.

建议: 謝罪は不要です。まず簡潔に意見を述べ、具体的な改善点を1〜2つ詳述してください。語彙（facility, library, resources）と文法（主語と動詞の一致、比較表現）を正しく使い、曖昧な表現（more and more, uh）を除き流暢に話しましょう。

示例: Yes. I would improve the facilities, especially the library. It needs a wider range of academic books and up-to-date journals so students can access better research materials.

建议: 内容は伝わるが多数の文法ミスと単語の誤用（professor/programming/target）があるため意味が曖昧です。まず目標（どの学位を取るか）を明確に述べ、必要な準備（英語力向上など）を具体的に説明し、時制と語彙（requirements, proficiency, by the end of this year）を正しく使いましょう。

示例: I plan to study for a degree in International Communication, so I need to improve my English to meet the program's entry requirements. I study English every day and hope to reach the required level by the end of this year.

× Yes, I have been working for about 15 years old now.

✓ Yes, I have been working for about 15 years now.

The phrase '15 years old' is used to describe age, not duration. When expressing how long you have been doing something with present perfect continuous, use 'for + duration' (for 15 years). Remove 'old'. Suggestion: Say 'I have been working for 15 years' or 'for about 15 years.'

× I am working at AIT company.

✓ I work at AIT Company.

Both 'I am working' and 'I work' can be correct, but simple present 'I work' is more natural for permanent employment. Also capitalize 'Company' if it is part of the name. Suggestion: Use 'I work at AIT Company' for a general statement about employment.

× I started at university in China about 20 years ago.

✓ I started university in China about 20 years ago.

The verb 'start' with 'university' does not require the preposition 'at' in this context; 'started university' is idiomatic. The past tense 'started' is correct. Suggestion: Say 'I started university' or 'I started at a university' if you want to emphasize location.

× My major is educational psychology, though there is a isn't any relation about recent working, but I like it at that time.

✓ My major was educational psychology, though it isn't related to my recent work, but I liked it at the time.

Several issues: tense mismatch (use past 'was' if referring to when studying), incorrect phrase 'there is a isn't any relation about' should be 'isn't related to', and 'recent working' is unnatural; use 'recent work'. 'I like it at that time' should be 'I liked it at the time' to match past context. Suggestion: Use 'My major was educational psychology, though it isn't related to my recent work; I liked it at the time.'

× Yes, of course, at the university in my hometown is very convenient for me, so I can save time and community with my UH classmates and on the other hand I can.

✓ Yes, of course. The university in my hometown is very convenient for me, so I can save time and communicate with my UH classmates. On the other hand, I can...

Original sentence has fragmented structure and the word 'community' is incorrect; likely 'communicate' was intended. Also the sentence trails off 'I can.' which is incomplete. Break into clearer sentences and use 'communicate with' for interaction. Suggestion: Complete the thought after 'On the other hand' or remove it: 'On the other hand, I can stay close to my family.'

× Sorry, I don't think about that question at that time, but I think maybe the facilities need to be improved.

✓ Sorry, I didn't think about that question at the time, but I think the facilities need to be improved.

Tense mismatch: 'don't think about that question at that time' mixes present with past reference; use past 'didn't think' and 'at the time'. 'Maybe' is optional; keep 'I think the facilities need to be improved.' Suggestion: Use consistent tense: 'I didn't think about that question at the time.'

× Uh, especially for library, it need be more and more, uh, kind of books for students to research.

✓ Especially the library needs more books for students to use for research.

Problems: 'for library' should be 'the library', subject-verb agreement 'it need' -> 'it needs', awkward 'more and more, kind of books' should be 'more books' or 'a wider variety of books', and 'to research' -> 'for research' or 'to use for research'. Suggestion: 'The library needs more books and a wider range of resources for student research.'

× I plan to study for a degree in international communication, so I need to improve my English professor to meet the programming requirements.

✓ I plan to study for a degree in international communication, so I need to improve my English proficiency to meet the program requirements.

Several errors: 'improve my English professor' is incorrect—should be 'English proficiency' (ability). 'programming requirements' likely intended 'program requirements'. Suggestion: Use 'English proficiency' and 'program requirements'.

× So I have learning English every day.

✓ So I am learning English every day.

Incorrect verb form 'have learning' should be 'am learning' for present continuous to describe an ongoing action. Alternatively 'I have been learning English every day' works to emphasize duration. Suggestion: Use 'I am learning English every day' or 'I have been learning English every day.'

× I hope to reach his target till this year.

✓ I hope to reach this target by the end of this year.

Pronoun 'his' is wrong; should be 'this' target. 'Till this year' is unclear; use 'by the end of this year' to express a deadline. Suggestion: Say 'I hope to reach this target by the end of this year.'