学习— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答较为自然且信息完整，但可以更简洁，避免重复表达“currently”和“in several months”表达时间信息。

示例: I'm a final-year biomedical engineering student, and I will graduate soon.

建议: 回答内容清晰，但存在语法错误（如冠词使用错误）和表达不够地道，建议注意冠词和复数形式的正确使用。

示例: I study at Shandong University, one of the top universities in China, because it offers excellent academic resources.

建议: 回答中有重复词汇（"warm warm hearted"），且句子结构略显冗长，建议避免重复并使用更自然的表达。

示例: Yes, it's a great place to study because of its excellent resources and supportive atmosphere. Moreover, the professors are very kind and approachable.

建议: 回答中有口语填充词“Uh”，影响流畅度；“overdated”用词不准确，建议使用“outdated”。

示例: Yes, although the school is generally good, some facilities are outdated and worn out. I hope they can be replaced with new ones.

建议: 回答信息完整，但句子较长且结构不够清晰，建议分句表达并注意语法，如“eyes test”应为“eye test”。

示例: I plan to study abroad to pursue a higher degree and deepen my knowledge. That's why I'm taking an eye test, which is required for studying overseas.

× Now I'm studying in Shandong University, which is considered the one of the top universities in China.

✓ Now I'm studying at Shandong University, which is considered one of the top universities in China.

“the one of the top universities”中“the”多余，应去掉；“in Shandong University”应改为“at Shandong University”，因为表示在某所大学学习用介词“at”。

× I choose this school because it has a good academic resources.

✓ I choose this school because it has good academic resources.

“a good academic resources”中“resources”是复数，前面不应加不定冠词“a”，应去掉“a”。

× Yes, of course, as I mentioned, there are excellent academic resources and supportive learning atmosphere which helps me improve my knowledge and skills.

✓ Yes, of course, as I mentioned, there are excellent academic resources and a supportive learning atmosphere which helps me improve my knowledge and skills.

“supportive learning atmosphere”前缺少冠词“a”，因为“atmosphere”是可数名词单数。

× Furthermore, the professors here are really nice and warm warm hearted.

✓ Furthermore, the professors here are really nice and warm-hearted.

“warm warm hearted”重复且拼写错误，应改为“warm-hearted”，表示“热心的”。

× Uh the school is generally good, but some of the facilities are overdated and worn out, so if possible I hope schools can replace them with new ones.

✓ Uh the school is generally good, but some of the facilities are outdated and worn out, so if possible I hope the school can replace them with new ones.

“overdated”应为“outdated”，表示“过时的”；“schools”应改为“the school”，指代特定学校。

× I'm planning to go abroad to pursue a higher degree and learn more in my field and so that's why I'm here taking an eyes test because it's a requirement for study overseas.

✓ I'm planning to go abroad to pursue a higher degree and learn more in my field, and so that's why I'm here taking an eye test because it's a requirement for studying overseas.

“eyes test”应为“eye test”，单数形式；“requirement for study overseas”中“study”应改为动名词“studying”，表示“学习”的动作。