学习— Part 1 评分报告
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Part 1
考官
Do you work or are you a student?
考生
I'm still a student and I major in finance. Now I am preparing for the IELTS exam to afford my education overseas.
考官
Where do you study?
考生
I study in China Foreign Affairs University in Beijing. It's a language university and I major in finance in this college.
考官
Is it a good place to study?
考生
Yes, our university has a great academic atmosphere and we can join many competitions about finance and also it has great facilities for our to use.
考官
Would you like the place where you study to make any changes?
考生
Yeah, I'd like to see more changes in a open, more practical courses and build more advanced library facilities.
考官
What are your future study plans?
考生
Well, I plan to study abroad first and then I will focus on finding jobs in this financial area.
评估
总分
语法
× I study in China Foreign Affairs University in Beijing.
✓ I study at China Foreign Affairs University in Beijing.
介词“in”用于表示在某个城市或国家，而表示在某个具体的学校或机构时，应使用介词“at”。因此，正确表达是“I study at China Foreign Affairs University”。
× ...and also it has great facilities for our to use.
✓ ...and also it has great facilities for us to use.
代词“our”是形容词性物主代词，后面应接名词，而此处需要宾格代词“us”作为介词宾语，故应使用“for us to use”。
× Yeah, I'd like to see more changes in a open, more practical courses and build more advanced library facilities.
✓ Yeah, I'd like to see more changes in open, more practical courses and build more advanced library facilities.
“open”是形容词，前面不应加不定冠词“a”，因为“courses”是复数，且“open”修饰复数名词时不加冠词。应去掉“a”。
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