学习— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答时语法有错误，如“I preparing”应为“I am preparing”，建议注意动词时态和主谓一致。此外，回答可以更简洁自然，避免冗余。

示例: I graduated from university this year and am currently taking a gap year while preparing my application for a master's program.

建议: 回答中表达了个人观点，但句子结构重复且有语法错误，如“too difficult for me and too abstract for me”重复，建议使用连接词使表达更流畅。

示例: I graduated from China Academy of Art, majoring in Art and Technology. However, I found the program quite difficult and abstract, so I prefer to study business design skills instead.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误，如“provide”应为“provides”，“facilities there is”应为“facilities there are”。建议注意主谓一致，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

示例: Yes, definitely. My school provides a creative atmosphere where students can design beautiful posters, and the facilities are very convenient.

建议: 回答中语法错误较多，如“It's made me uncomfortable”应为“It makes me uncomfortable”，“should be changing”应为“should be changed”。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，使用连接词。

示例: Yes, I would like the desks and chairs to be bigger because the current ones are too small and make me uncomfortable.

建议: 回答中语法错误明显，如“want to deeper”应为“want to deepen”，表达不够流畅且有口语填充词“uh”，建议使用完整句子并避免口语化词汇。

示例: I am preparing my application for a master's program because I want to deepen my knowledge in business design.

× Well, actually I graduated from my university this year and now I'm in a gap year and I preparing my application for my master's program.

✓ Well, actually I graduated from my university this year and now I'm in a gap year and I am preparing my application for my master's program.

句中缺少助动词“am”，导致动词形式错误。现在进行时需要用“be动词 + 动词ing”结构。

× I think my school is a good place to study because it provide creative atmosphere for students to create some beautiful things like posters and the facilities there is very convenient.

✓ I think my school is a good place to study because it provides a creative atmosphere for students to create some beautiful things like posters and the facilities there are very convenient.

主语是第三人称单数“it”，动词应使用第三人称单数形式“provides”。另外，“facilities”是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式“are”。

× I think my school is a good place to study because it provide creative atmosphere for students to create some beautiful things like posters and the facilities there is very convenient.

✓ I think my school is a good place to study because it provides a creative atmosphere for students to create some beautiful things like posters and the facilities there are very convenient.

“facilities”是复数名词，谓语动词应使用复数形式“are”，而不是单数“is”。

× It's made me uncomfortable.

✓ It has made me uncomfortable.

此处应使用现在完成时“has made”，表示从过去到现在的影响，而不是一般过去时“made”。

× So I think it should be changing.

✓ So I think it should be changed.

“should be”后应接过去分词构成被动语态，“changing”是现在分词，使用错误。

× The size should be changed and bigger than now.

✓ The size should be changed to be bigger than now.

“bigger than now”需要用不定式结构“to be bigger than now”来表达尺寸变大的意图。