学习— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Apni answer e kichu grammar error ache, ar kichu information onek bar bar use korchen. Apni chesta korun sentence gulo ke shothik grammar e rakhte, ar information gulo ke concise rakhte. For example, 'I am a first-year bachelor student at United International University, which is one of the most popular universities in my country.'

示例: I am currently a first-year bachelor student at United International University, which is one of the most popular universities in my country.

建议: Apnar answer e repetition ache, ar kichu phrase gulo natural na. Apni chesta korun direct answer dite, ar supporting details e specific information add korte. For example, 'I study at United International University, which is well-known for its quality education. I really enjoy the friendly atmosphere there.'

示例: I study at United International University, which is well-known for its quality education. I really enjoy the friendly atmosphere there.

建议: Apnar answer e kichu grammar mistake ache, ar kichu phrase gulo natural na. Apni chesta korun linking words use korte, ar sentence gulo ke shothik grammar e rakhte. For example, 'Yes, it is a great place to study because the environment is more relaxing and comfortable compared to other universities. Moreover, the faculty members are supportive and the courses are very interesting.'

示例: Yes, it is a great place to study because the environment is more relaxing and comfortable compared to other universities. Moreover, the faculty members are supportive and the courses are very interesting.

建议: Apnar answer e grammar o sentence structure onek improve kora dorkar. Apni chesta korun clear ar direct answer dite, ar supporting details e specific changes mention korte. For example, 'Yes, I would like some changes, such as updating the courses and improving the faculty to provide better education for students.'

示例: Yes, I would like some changes, such as updating the courses and improving the faculty to provide better education for students.

建议: Apnar answer e kichu grammar error ache, ar kichu phrase gulo natural na. Apni chesta korun sentence gulo ke shothik grammar e rakhte, ar clear expression dite. For example, 'I want to study abroad to become an independent international student. This experience will make me proud and help me grow personally.'

示例: I want to study abroad to become an independent international student. This experience will make me proud and help me grow personally.

× I'm currently doing my bachelor on his first year in my United International University which is really popular university in my country.

✓ I'm currently doing my bachelor's in my first year at United International University, which is a really popular university in my country.

The word 'bachelor' should be in possessive form 'bachelor's' to indicate the degree. 'His' is incorrect here; it should be 'my' to match the subject. Also, 'a really popular university' requires the indefinite article 'a' before 'really popular university'. 'United International University' does not need 'my' before it, and 'on his first year' should be 'in my first year'. In English (Bangladesh), we say 'doing my bachelor's degree in my first year at the university.'

× I have been studying at United International University which is really popular university in my country rather than other universities and I really love my university too much.

✓ I have been studying at United International University, which is a really popular university in my country compared to other universities, and I really love my university very much.

The phrase 'really popular university' needs the article 'a' before it. 'Rather than other universities' is better expressed as 'compared to other universities'. 'Too much' is informal and better replaced with 'very much' in this context. In English (Bangladesh), we use 'a' before singular countable nouns and say 'compared to' instead of 'rather than' when comparing institutions.

× their environment was quite different for from others university and it gives me a relax and comfort environment.

✓ The environment there is quite different from other universities, and it gives me a relaxed and comfortable environment.

'Their environment' is vague; 'the environment there' is clearer. 'Was' should be 'is' to match present tense. 'For from others university' is incorrect; it should be 'from other universities'. 'Relax' and 'comfort' are nouns; here, adjectives 'relaxed' and 'comfortable' are needed to describe the environment. In English (Bangladesh), we say 'the environment is different from other universities' and use adjectives to describe feelings or conditions.

× Also the faculty and other interesting courses is really good for me.

✓ Also, the faculty and other interesting courses are really good for me.

The subject 'faculty and other interesting courses' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'. In English (Bangladesh), subject-verb agreement is important; plural subjects take plural verbs.

× if there make any changes, I always love this place.

✓ If there are any changes, I will always love this place.

'There make any changes' is incorrect; it should be 'there are any changes'. Also, to express future possibility, 'will' is appropriate. 'Always love' is better with 'will always love' to indicate future intention. In English (Bangladesh), we use 'there are' for existence and 'will' for future actions.

× The changes is really important for every places and like changing the faculties or changing the courses maintain it's really crucial for every students.

✓ Changes are really important for every place, and things like changing the faculties or courses are really crucial for every student.

'The changes is' should be 'Changes are' because 'changes' is plural. 'Every places' should be 'every place' (singular). 'Every students' should be 'every student' (singular). The sentence structure is improved for clarity. In English (Bangladesh), singular quantifiers like 'every' are followed by singular nouns.

× I want to be a independent international student.

✓ I want to be an independent international student.

The article 'a' before a word starting with a vowel sound should be 'an'. 'Independent' starts with a vowel sound, so 'an' is correct. In English (Bangladesh), 'an' is used before vowel sounds for smooth pronunciation.

× That's why I want to go abroad for my health studies and show everyone that that I can everything with alone and I think it makes me proudful in my life.

✓ That's why I want to go abroad for my health studies and show everyone that I can do everything alone, and I think it makes me proud in my life.

'That that' is redundant; only one 'that' is needed. 'I can everything with alone' is incorrect; it should be 'I can do everything alone'. 'Proudful' is not a correct word; 'proud' is the correct adjective. In English (Bangladesh), avoid redundant words, use correct verb phrases, and use 'proud' instead of 'proudful'.