学习— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答较为直接，但存在语法错误和表达不够自然的问题，例如“plan go on study”应为“plan to continue my studies”。建议注意动词不定式的正确使用，并使表达更流畅自然。

示例: I'm currently a university student majoring in law, and this is my final year. After graduation, I plan to continue my studies and pursue a higher degree in Hong Kong.

建议: 回答内容重复了上一题的部分信息，缺乏针对“Where do you study?”的直接回答。建议直接回答学校名称，并简要说明原因，避免重复。

示例: I study at Peking University, which is known for its strong law program and excellent faculty.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误，如“huge number”应为“a large number”，“help you studies learn”表达不自然。建议使用更准确的表达，并增加连接词使句子更连贯。

示例: Yes, Peking University is a great place to study because it has a large number of excellent teachers who support students. Thanks to their guidance, I have gained extensive knowledge and improved my skills in various areas.

建议: 回答内容具体，但存在拼写错误，如“state”应为“seat”，且句子结构略显重复。建议注意拼写并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

示例: I hope the library could have more space because it is always crowded. Sometimes I need a quiet place to study alone, and other times I require space for group discussions with classmates.

建议: 回答内容丰富且结构较好，但存在少量语法错误，如“master degree”应为“master's degree”，“academic resource”应为“academic resources”。建议注意名词复数形式和冠词使用。

示例: After graduation, I plan to pursue a master's degree in international law in Hong Kong because it offers excellent academic resources and a multicultural environment. This will deepen my understanding of the global legal system and enhance my international communication skills.

× After graduation I plan go on study and get a higher degree in Hong Kong.

✓ After graduation, I plan to go on studying and get a higher degree in Hong Kong.

动词plan后面应接不定式to do或动名词doing，这里应使用to go on studying，表示计划继续学习。

× There are huge number of excellent teachers who help you studies learn.

✓ There are a huge number of excellent teachers who help you study.

help后面接动词原形study，不能用studies。且huge number前应加冠词a。

× There are huge number of excellent teachers who help you studies learn.

✓ There are a huge number of excellent teachers who help you study.

number前应加冠词a，且help后面动词用原形study。

× I could barely find a state.

✓ I could barely find a seat.

state应为seat，表示座位，state是错误的单词。

× After graduation, I plan to pursue a master degree in international law in Hong Kong because it offers excellent academic resource and multicultural environment.

✓ After graduation, I plan to pursue a master's degree in international law in Hong Kong because it offers excellent academic resources and a multicultural environment.

master degree前应加所有格's，academic resource应为复数resources，multicultural environment前应加不定冠词a。