学习— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答中存在语法错误，如“I studying”应为“I am studying”，且句子结构不够自然。建议使用完整的句子并注意时态一致。

示例: I am currently a senior student at Chongqing Finance University, majoring in finance.

建议: 回答中有语法错误和表达不自然，如“come to here”应为“come here”，且“different landscape”表达不够具体。建议使用更准确的表达和丰富细节。

示例: I study in Chongqing, a bustling metropolis known for its impressive skyscrapers and diverse landscapes. Many tourists from around the world visit to experience its unique scenery.

建议: 回答中语法和表达不清晰，如“or usually organized activity about exchange our knowledge”不通顺。建议简化句子结构，使用连词使表达更连贯。

示例: Yes, it's a good place to study because Chongqing is cozy and quiet. Moreover, our university often organizes activities to exchange knowledge, which is very helpful.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰，如“aid sun seats”不明白意思。建议使用简单明了的句子表达需求。

示例: I usually study in the university library, but there are often not enough seats. I hope the school can add more seats so that everyone has a place to study.

建议: 回答中语法错误较多，如“go to the Nepal”应为“go to Nepal”，“start are my master degree”表达错误。建议使用正确的语法和更自然的表达。

示例: I plan to take a gap year to travel to places like Nepal and Europe to experience different lifestyles. After that, I will start my master's degree in Australia.

× I am a senior student recently and I studying in Chongqing Finance University majoring in finance.

✓ I am a senior student recently and I am studying at Chongqing Finance University majoring in finance.

句中缺少动词be的正确形式，导致现在进行时态表达错误。应使用“am studying”表示正在进行的动作。

× I am a senior student recently and I studying in Chongqing Finance University majoring in finance.

✓ I am a senior student recently and I am studying at Chongqing Finance University majoring in finance.

表示在某个学校学习时，英语中通常用介词“at”而非“in”。

× I study in Chongqing, which is a metropolis with a lot of skyscrapers and infrastructures.

✓ I study in Chongqing, which is a metropolis with a lot of skyscrapers and infrastructure.

infrastructure是不可数名词，不应使用复数形式。

× Many tourists from whole world come to here and to visit the different landscape.

✓ Many tourists from all over the world come here to visit the different landscapes.

“whole world”应改为“all over the world”更自然；“come to here”应为“come here”；“landscape”应使用复数形式“landscapes”。

× Many tourists from whole world come to here and to visit the different landscape.

✓ Many tourists from all over the world come here to visit the different landscapes.

“come to here”中“to”多余，应直接用“come here”。

× It's not only because the surrounding of Chongqing is very cozy and quiet, but also our university or usually organized activity about exchange our knowledge.

✓ It's not only because the surroundings of Chongqing are very cozy and quiet, but also because our university usually organizes activities to exchange knowledge.

“surrounding”应为复数“surroundings”；“or”应为“but also because”；“organized”应改为动词形式“organizes”；“activity”应为复数“activities”；“about exchange our knowledge”表达不当，应改为“to exchange knowledge”。

× It's not only because the surrounding of Chongqing is very cozy and quiet, but also our university or usually organized activity about exchange our knowledge.

✓ It's not only because the surroundings of Chongqing are very cozy and quiet, but also because our university usually organizes activities to exchange knowledge.

“surrounding”应为复数形式“surroundings”，且主谓一致应使用复数动词“are”。

× It's not only because the surrounding of Chongqing is very cozy and quiet, but also our university or usually organized activity about exchange our knowledge.

✓ It's not only because the surroundings of Chongqing are very cozy and quiet, but also because our university usually organizes activities to exchange knowledge.

“or”用错，应使用“but also because”连接两个原因。

× I usually study at the library of my university, but most of the time the seats are not enough.

✓ I usually study at the library of my university, but most of the time there are not enough seats.

“the seats are not enough”表达不自然，应改为“there are not enough seats”表示座位不足。

× I usually study at the library of my university, but most of the time the seats are not enough.

✓ I usually study at the library of my university, but most of the time there are not enough seats.

表示存在某物时，应使用“There be”结构，原句缺少此结构。

× So I hope my school aid sun seats in the library which make everyone can have one seat to study.

✓ So I hope my school can add some seats in the library so that everyone can have a seat to study.

“aid sun seats”应为“can add some seats”；“which make everyone can have one seat”表达不正确，应改为“so that everyone can have a seat”。

× So I hope my school aid sun seats in the library which make everyone can have one seat to study.

✓ So I hope my school can add some seats in the library so that everyone can have a seat to study.

“make everyone can have”语法错误，应使用“so that everyone can have”表示目的。

× I want to have a gap year to explore the world such as go to the Nepal or go to the Europe to explore different lifestyle and then I will start are my master degree going to Australia to finish it.

✓ I want to have a gap year to explore the world, such as going to Nepal or Europe to explore different lifestyles, and then I will start my master's degree by going to Australia to finish it.

“go to the Nepal”应为“going to Nepal”，去除定冠词“the”；“go to the Europe”应为“going to Europe”；“lifestyle”应为复数“lifestyles”；“start are my master degree”语法错误，应为“start my master's degree”；“going to Australia to finish it”应用作状语。

× I want to have a gap year to explore the world such as go to the Nepal or go to the Europe to explore different lifestyle and then I will start are my master degree going to Australia to finish it.

✓ I want to have a gap year to explore the world, such as going to Nepal or Europe to explore different lifestyles, and then I will start my master's degree by going to Australia to finish it.

“such as”后面应接动名词形式“going”，而非动词原形“go”。