学习— Part 1 评分报告

× So I am a student who study in high school and I am 15 years old.

✓ So I am a student who studies in high school and I am 15 years old.

The verb 'study' should be in the third person singular form 'studies' to agree with the singular subject 'who' referring to 'student'. This is a subject-verb agreement issue involving singular and plural forms.

× The teacher in high school are pretty funny and really like student.

✓ The teachers in high school are pretty funny and really like students.

'Teacher' and 'student' should be plural ('teachers' and 'students') because the sentence refers to multiple teachers and students. This is a singular and plural issue where the noun forms must match the intended meaning.

× So I study at the high school in that quite far from my hometown and it's it's cold that will be high school.

✓ So I study at the high school that is quite far from my hometown and it's cold there.

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used before 'that quite far'; it should be 'that is quite far'. Also, 'that will be high school' is unclear and corrected to 'there' to indicate location. This is an incorrect use of prepositions and sentence structure issue.

× For students who want to study in there also they teach also they teach past skill and soft skill amongst all the subjects to make student like to study and to interact with the pupil with teacher.

✓ For students who want to study there, they also teach past skills and soft skills among all the subjects to make students like to study and to interact with the pupils and teachers.

'Past skill' and 'soft skill' should be plural ('past skills' and 'soft skills'). 'Student' should be plural 'students'. 'Pupil' and 'teacher' should be plural 'pupils' and 'teachers'. Also, 'in there' is incorrect; 'there' alone is sufficient. This is a singular and plural issue and incorrect preposition use.

× I would like to say that my school need to narrow the the field force unit to play more sport and then need to combine AI, AI and technology into their lesson to make them become more easy to study.

✓ I would like to say that my school needs to narrow the field for sports to play more sports and then needs to combine AI and technology into their lessons to make it easier to study.

'School' is singular, so the verb should be 'needs' not 'need'. 'Field force unit' is unclear and corrected to 'field for sports'. 'Sport' should be plural 'sports' when referring to multiple types or activities. 'Lesson' should be plural 'lessons'. 'More easy' is incorrect; 'easier' is the correct comparative form. This involves singular/plural issues, verb agreement, and adjective use.

× So my study so my future study plans it is study abroad in Australia because this is one of my favorite plans and I always concentrate myself into this since I was in a high school scene, I was in a secondary school and everyday I learning and study many English to.

✓ So my future study plan is to study abroad in Australia because this is one of my favorite plans and I have always concentrated on this since I was in high school. I was in secondary school and every day I learn and study a lot of English too.

The sentence has multiple tense errors: 'it is study' should be 'is to study'; 'always concentrate myself into' should be 'have always concentrated on'; 'everyday' should be 'every day'; 'I learning and study' should be 'I learn and study'; 'many English to' should be 'a lot of English too'. These are present tense and verb form issues requiring correction for proper tense and usage.