学习— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors that affect fluency and coherence. Try to keep your response concise, directly answer the question, and avoid redundancy. Use simple, clear sentences and correct grammar to improve naturalness and effectiveness.

示例: I am currently a student. I recently took an important college exam and am eagerly waiting for the results. Additionally, I have joined a language institute to improve my English communication skills because I enjoy speaking English.

建议: Your answer lacks clarity and contains many grammatical mistakes. Focus on giving a clear topic sentence followed by specific supporting details. Use linking words to connect ideas logically and avoid repetition.

示例: I study at Issued Your Degree College, where I recently took an exam and am waiting for the results. Currently, I am attending the London Academy to polish my communication skills. The teachers there are very engaging and motivate us by organizing activities that help everyone participate without difficulty.

建议: Your answer is relevant but contains many fillers and grammatical errors. Try to reduce hesitation sounds and use more precise vocabulary. Structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details linked logically.

示例: Yes, it is a great place to study because it provides a supportive educational atmosphere. For example, last year they organized an English lesson where each student prepared a presentation to express their feelings, which helped us improve our speaking skills.

建议: Your answer is somewhat confusing due to grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Aim to express your ideas clearly and directly. Use linking words to connect your points and avoid repetition.

示例: No, I don't think any changes are needed because the teachers are very engaging and always clear our doubts. I especially appreciate that they organize activities giving students a chance to express their emotions.

建议: Your answer has good content but is affected by grammatical mistakes and unclear phrasing. Try to use clear and correct sentences, and organize your ideas logically with linking words to improve coherence.

示例: I plan to pursue an MBA from a reputed university. Recently, I joined an institute to improve my communication skills so I can communicate effectively with teachers from other countries. I am working hard to make my dreams a reality.

× Recently I had taken the exam of my college and I'm curiously awaiting of such a of my result.

✓ Recently I took the exam at my college and I'm curiously awaiting my result.

The past perfect tense 'had taken' is incorrect here because the action is simply a past event without a reference to another past event. Use simple past 'took'. Also, 'awaiting of such a of my result' is incorrect; 'awaiting my result' is correct.

× I'm curiously awaiting of such a of my result.

✓ I'm curiously awaiting my result.

The verb 'await' does not require the preposition 'of'. The phrase 'of such a of my result' is incorrect and should be omitted.

× But due to some grammatical errors I have have faced A difficulty which develop a fillers in my sleeping speaking skills which affect my fluency.

✓ But due to some grammatical errors, I have faced difficulties which develop fillers in my speaking skills and affect my fluency.

The phrase 'have have faced A difficulty' is incorrect; 'have faced difficulties' is better. 'Develop a fillers' is incorrect; 'develop fillers' is correct. 'Sleeping speaking skills' is incorrect; it should be 'speaking skills'.

× Apart from that there I got.

✓ Apart from that, I have improved.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. It needs to be restructured to convey a complete thought.

× the name of my college is issued your degree college there I had taken the exam of exam and I'm curiously waiting off my result.

✓ The name of my college is Issued Your Degree College. I took the exam there and I'm curiously waiting for my result.

The phrase 'waiting off my result' is incorrect; it should be 'waiting for my result'. Also, 'had taken the exam of exam' is incorrect; use simple past 'took the exam'.

× Now I have joined the institute that is the London Academy to Polish my communication skills and their teachers will are very engaging which are always motivating me to do something interesting in my life.

✓ Now I have joined the institute, the London Academy, to polish my communication skills. Their teachers are very engaging and always motivate me to do something interesting in my life.

The sentence has pronoun and verb form errors: 'their teachers will are' is incorrect; it should be 'their teachers are'. Also, 'which are always motivating me' should be 'and always motivate me'.

× Moreover, each time they have organized the activity so that no one face a difficulty.

✓ Moreover, each time they organize activities so that no one faces any difficulty.

'Each time they have organized the activity' is awkward; use simple present 'organize activities'. 'No one face a difficulty' should be 'no one faces any difficulty'.

× It is really provide such a umm educational atmosphere.

✓ It really provides such an educational atmosphere.

The verb 'provide' needs to be in third person singular 'provides' to agree with 'It'. Also, 'such a umm educational' should be 'such an educational' because 'educational' starts with a vowel sound.

× Each times they have organized something new so that everyone got a chance to uh, to express their talents in front of others.

✓ Each time they organize something new so that everyone gets a chance to express their talents in front of others.

'Each times' is incorrect; use 'Each time'. Also, tense should be consistent; use present tense 'organize' and 'gets'.

× where each umm student have to prepare the presentation and to express their feelings in front of others in in by speaking.

✓ where each student has to prepare a presentation and express their feelings in front of others by speaking.

'Each student have' is incorrect; it should be 'each student has' to agree in number. Also, 'the presentation' should be 'a presentation'.

× No, I don't think so that I need to be made anything so changes in such on such a place, because all teachers are very engaging.

✓ No, I don't think that any changes need to be made in such a place because all teachers are very engaging.

The original sentence has awkward pronoun and word order. 'I need to be made anything so changes' is incorrect; it should be 'any changes need to be made'.

× Each time they are prefers to clear the doubts of the their students.

✓ Each time they prefer to clear the doubts of their students.

'They are prefers' is incorrect; it should be 'they prefer'. Also, 'the their students' is redundant; use 'their students'.

× But one thing is that really admire me that each time they have organized the activity where they they given us students a chance to express their emotions.

✓ But one thing I really admire is that each time they organize activities where they give us students a chance to express our emotions.

The sentence has pronoun and tense errors: 'is that really admire me' should be 'I really admire is that'. 'They have organized' should be 'they organize' for habitual action. 'They they given' should be 'they give'.

× Well, I want to do MBA from a rapporteur university for some purpose.

✓ Well, I want to do an MBA at a reputed university for some purpose.

'Do MBA from' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'do an MBA at'. Also, 'rapporteur university' is likely a mispronunciation or error; 'reputed university' is appropriate.

× I have joined recently the institute where I got a chance to improve my communication skills because so that I don't face a difficulty to communicate with the teachers who is living in another country.

✓ I have recently joined the institute where I got a chance to improve my communication skills so that I don't face difficulty communicating with teachers who live in another country.

'Because so that' is redundant; use 'so that'. 'Face a difficulty to communicate' should be 'face difficulty communicating'. 'Teachers who is' should be 'teachers who live'.

× And I did lot of efforts to make my dreams into a reality.

✓ And I have made a lot of efforts to make my dreams a reality.

'Did lot of efforts' is incorrect; use 'have made a lot of efforts' to indicate ongoing effort. Also, 'into a reality' should be 'a reality'.