学习— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答时语法错误较多，表达不够自然，且内容重复。建议简洁明了地回答问题，避免重复和语法错误。

示例: I am a student majoring in business administration. However, I find the course content a bit boring and not very detailed, which makes me worry about my future career opportunities.

建议: 回答较为完整，但语法和表达有待改进。建议使用连词使句子更流畅，并注意时态一致。

示例: I study at Chongqing University, which is a good university. The campus environment is beautiful, with many trees and buildings, and I really like it.

建议: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够清晰。建议简洁表达观点，使用恰当的连接词。

示例: Yes, it is a good place to study. The campus environment is peaceful, and there are many modern facilities for both students and teachers, which I really appreciate.

建议: 表达不清晰且语法错误较多，内容组织混乱。建议明确表达想法，避免重复，使用完整句子。

示例: The campus facilities are generally good, but the dormitories are crowded because four to six students share one room. I hope they can improve the living conditions.

建议: 回答表达不够流畅，有重复词汇。建议使用连贯的句子表达计划，并注意语法正确。

示例: I have decided to pursue a master's degree at a foreign university, so recently I have been focusing more on improving my English skills.

× I am student and I major in business administration but I think it's not good for my career opportunities because it's so I think the knowledge is so bored and not detailed.

✓ I am a student and I major in business administration but I think it's not good for my career opportunities because I think the knowledge is so boring and not detailed.

这里缺少冠词“a”，因为“student”是可数名词，单数形式前需要冠词。并且“bored”用错了，应该用形容词“boring”来描述“knowledge”，表示“知识很无聊”。

× I studied in Chongqing University, I think it's a good university and the environment is beautiful and there has many trees and buildings.

✓ I study at Chongqing University, I think it's a good university and the environment is beautiful and there are many trees and buildings.

这里时态不一致，问题中询问的是现在的学习情况，应该用现在时“study”。另外，“there has many trees”中“has”应改为“are”，因为“trees and buildings”是复数，使用“there are”。

× I studied in Chongqing University, I think it's a good university and the environment is beautiful and there has many trees and buildings.

✓ I study at Chongqing University, I think it's a good university and the environment is beautiful and there are many trees and buildings.

“there has many trees”中，“has”用法错误，正确用法是“there are”，因为“trees and buildings”是复数。

× I think the EMBAR, I think the campus environment is peaceful and there there are many modern infrastructure for many students and teacher and I love it.

✓ I think the EMBAR, I think the campus environment is peaceful and there is much modern infrastructure for many students and teachers and I love it.

“there are many modern infrastructure”中，“infrastructure”是不可数名词，不能用复数形式“are many”，应使用“there is much”。另外，“teacher”应为复数“teachers”。

× I think the EMBAR, I think the campus environment is peaceful and there there are many modern infrastructure for many students and teacher and I love it.

✓ I think the EMBAR, I think the campus environment is peaceful and there is much modern infrastructure for many students and teachers and I love it.

“teacher”应为复数“teachers”，因为指多个老师。

× Oh, well, I think the current, I think the current score are very good. But the apartment, you know, many four or six students live in this room. It's it's so crowded and I think it changed.

✓ Oh, well, I think the current score is very good. But the apartment, you know, four or six students live in this room. It's so crowded and I think it should be changed.

“score are”应为“score is”，因为“score”是单数。句子中“many four or six students”中“many”多余，应去掉。最后“I think it changed”时态和表达不准确，应改为“should be changed”表示建议。

× Oh, well, I think the current, I think the current score are very good. But the apartment, you know, many four or six students live in this room. It's it's so crowded and I think it changed.

✓ Oh, well, I think the current score is very good. But the apartment, you know, four or six students live in this room. It's so crowded and I think it should be changed.

“I think it changed”表达不准确，应该用情态动词“should”表示建议或必要性，即“应该被改变”。

× Well, I decided to study for a master's degree at a foreign university, so I so recently I pay more attention to study English.

✓ Well, I have decided to study for a master's degree at a foreign university, so recently I have been paying more attention to studying English.

“decided”用过去时不太合适，表示最近的决定应用现在完成时“have decided”。“pay more attention to study English”中，“study”应改为动名词“studying”。

× Well, I decided to study for a master's degree at a foreign university, so I so recently I pay more attention to study English.

✓ Well, I have decided to study for a master's degree at a foreign university, so recently I have been paying more attention to studying English.

“pay attention to”后面应接动名词形式“studying”，而不是动词原形“study”。