学习— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct verb forms and clearer sentence structure. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise.

示例: I am currently a student at a university in Nepal, but since my courses are online, I study from home.

建议: Your answer needs clearer and more natural phrasing. Avoid vague words like 'confident' when describing a place. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific reasons for your preference.

示例: I prefer studying in my room at my special desk because it's quiet and comfortable. Also, I can take breaks whenever I want, so studying at home is easier for me than going to the library.

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to explain why the place is good with specific details and use correct sentence structures. Avoid confusing phrases like 'personality library.'

示例: Yes, it's a great place for me because I have decorated it according to my taste, which makes me feel comfortable and focused. It's much easier for me than going to a public library.

建议: Your answer is brief and contains filler words. Try to give a clear and complete response with reasons. Avoid unnecessary hesitation and use correct grammar.

示例: No, I wouldn't like to make any changes because the study space suits my mood and helps me concentrate well.

建议: Your answer is clear but could be improved by using more precise vocabulary and linking words to make it more natural and detailed.

示例: I plan to pursue a master's degree, and I also hope to study in America to gain more advanced knowledge and experience.

× I'm sitting in Nepal's university for now but my courses are online so I stay in home and studies.

✓ I'm studying at a university in Nepal for now, but my courses are online so I stay at home and study.

The verb 'sitting' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'studying' to indicate attending university. Also, 'stay in home' should be 'stay at home' because 'at' is the correct preposition for 'home'. Finally, 'studies' should be 'study' to agree with the subject 'I' in present tense.

× I'm sitting in Nepal's university for now but my courses are online so I stay in home and studies.

✓ I'm studying at a university in Nepal for now, but my courses are online so I stay at home and study.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect when referring to 'university' and 'home'. The correct preposition is 'at' for both 'university' and 'home' in this context.

× I prefer studying in my room, uh on my special desk. It's so quiet and confident and I have a free destination to move or to have a break.

✓ I prefer studying in my room, on my special desk. It's so quiet and comfortable, and I have the freedom to move or take a break.

The word 'confident' is incorrectly used; the correct adjective is 'comfortable' to describe the environment. Also, 'free destination' is incorrect; it should be 'freedom' to express the ability to move or take a break.

× So I prefer study at home rather than library.

✓ So I prefer to study at home rather than at the library.

The verb 'prefer' should be followed by 'to study' for correct infinitive form. Also, 'library' needs the definite article 'the' and the preposition 'at' before it.

× It's so easier for me.

✓ It's so easy for me.

The word 'easier' is a comparative adjective and requires a comparison object. Since none is provided, the base adjective 'easy' should be used.

× I personalize it in my own design so I have a lot of work in my personality library and it is so easy for me rather than go to a Public Library.

✓ I personalize it with my own design, so I have a lot of work in my personal library and it is much easier for me than going to a public library.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect; 'with' is correct for 'personalize with my own design'. 'Personality library' is incorrect; it should be 'personal library'. Also, 'rather than go' should be 'than going' for parallel structure. 'Public Library' should not be capitalized unless it's a proper noun.

× No, it's OK. Umm, I prefer to keep it just like this and not uh, have a changes.

✓ No, it's OK. Umm, I prefer to keep it just like this and not have any changes.

The phrase 'have a changes' is incorrect because 'changes' is plural and 'a' is singular. It should be 'any changes' without the article 'a'.

× I want to get my master degree and also I want to go to America for more studies.

✓ I want to get my master's degree and also I want to go to America for further studies.

The term 'master degree' should be 'master's degree' to indicate possession. Also, 'more studies' is better expressed as 'further studies' in this context.