学习— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答较简短，缺少细节和连贯性。建议在回答中加入更多信息，如学习的专业或未来计划，使回答更自然且内容丰富。

示例: I'm currently a student who has just graduated from high school, and I'm planning to pursue a degree in computer science at university.

建议: 回答信息明确，但句子结构稍显简单。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，同时补充一些关于学校的描述。

示例: I studied at Changzhou Beijing High School, and this September, I will begin my studies at Nanjing Normal University, which is known for its excellent education programs.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够自然的问题。建议注意语法准确性，使用更地道的表达，并且避免重复。

示例: I believe my high school is a great place to study because it has advanced facilities such as modern science labs that create an engaging learning environment. Moreover, the teachers are very responsible and always ready to assist us when we face challenges.

建议: 回答表达基本清楚，但句子结构较为简单，且“gradually bigger population”表达不够地道。建议使用更自然的表达方式并丰富细节。

示例: I think the school is quite good, but I would like the classrooms to be larger to accommodate the increasing number of students.

建议: 回答内容丰富，但句子较长且缺少适当的连接词。建议分句表达并使用连接词，使表达更清晰流畅。

示例: During the first two years at university, I plan to study hard to achieve excellent grades. Additionally, I will participate in extracurricular activities to improve my social skills. In the later years, I intend to take national exams that could support my application to Oxford.

× I'm a student and I have just graduated from my high school.

✓ I'm a student and I have just graduated from high school.

这里的“my high school”不需要冠词“my”，因为通常说“graduate from high school”时不加物主代词。

× I used to study in my high school, Changzhou Beijing High School, and I'm going to study in Nanjing Normal University on September.

✓ I used to study at my high school, Changzhou Beijing High School, and I'm going to study at Nanjing Normal University in September.

表示在某个学校学习，介词应使用“at”而非“in”。表示月份时应使用介词“in”，而非“on”。

× our teachers share our responsible and are always willing to help us whenever we meet difficulties.

✓ our teachers share our responsibility and are always willing to help us whenever we meet difficulties.

“responsible”是形容词，句中应使用名词“responsibility”来表达“责任”。

× I think it's good enough, but if necessary I hope the classrooms can be bigger because of the gradually bigger population in our school.

✓ I think it's good enough, but if necessary I hope the classrooms can be bigger because of the gradually increasing population in our school.

“bigger population”表达不准确，应使用“increasing population”表示“逐渐增长的人口”。

× In the first two years of my university life, I will try my best to study hard and get an excellent score and also I will take part in some activities to strengthen my social skills.

✓ In the first two years of my university life, I will try my best to study hard and get excellent scores, and also I will take part in some activities to strengthen my social skills.

“an excellent score”应改为复数“excellent scores”，因为通常指多个科目的成绩。

× In the following two years I will take part in some national tests which may be of some help for my admission to Oxford.

✓ In the following two years, I will take part in some national tests which may be of some help for my admission to Oxford.

句首时间状语后应加逗号以符合英语书写规范。