学习— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答不够完整且表达不清晰，缺少具体专业名称，句子结构不完整。建议明确说明专业名称，并用完整句子表达。

示例: I am currently a student at Nanjing University of Posts and Telecommunications, and I plan to major in computer science, which is a rapidly developing field.

建议: 回答中有语法错误和用词不当，如“start the in the library”和“Celebre”可能是错误词汇。建议使用正确表达并简洁说明学习地点和原因。

示例: I usually study in the library during my free time because it provides a quiet and comfortable environment that helps me concentrate.

建议: 回答较好，但句子略显重复，建议使用连接词使表达更流畅，并丰富细节。

示例: Yes, I think it is a great place to study because it has bright lighting, many clean desks, and abundant digital resources, which all help me focus better.

建议: 表达基本清楚，但用词不够自然，建议使用更地道的表达方式，并说明具体改进的理由。

示例: I find the temperature a bit warm sometimes, so I hope they can install air purifiers or air conditioners to make the environment more comfortable.

建议: 句子结构不完整且有语法错误，如“for do some advanced academic”和“have a lot of knowledge”。建议用完整句子表达未来计划，并正确使用动词形式。

示例: I plan to pursue a master's degree at the National University of Singapore because it offers excellent advanced academic programs. I also admire Professor Sale, who is very knowledgeable and kind.

× I am now a student at Nanjing University of Post and Telecommunications and I may major in which is a developing field.

✓ I am now a student at Nanjing University of Post and Telecommunications, and I may major in a developing field.

原句中“may major in which is a developing field”结构不完整且不符合英语表达习惯，应改为“may major in a developing field”，使句子结构完整且通顺。

× I usually start the in the library when I have free time because I think Celebre offers a comfortable space and a quiet atmosphere for study.

✓ I usually study in the library when I have free time because I think Celebre offers a comfortable space and a quiet atmosphere for studying.

原句中“start the in the library”搭配错误，应改为“study in the library”。此外，“for study”应改为“for studying”，符合动名词用法。

× Yes, I think so, because it has bright light and it offers so many clean desks and digital resources as well, so I can study very well.

✓ Yes, I think so, because it has bright lighting and it offers many clean desks and digital resources as well, so I can study very well.

“bright light”应改为“bright lighting”更符合表达；“so many clean desks”中“so many”用于可数名词，语气较强，改为“many”更合适。

× I think the temperature is a bit hot, so I wish it can introduce good air cleaners to cool its atmosphere.

✓ I think the temperature is a bit hot, so I wish it could introduce good air cleaners to cool the atmosphere.

“wish”后面表达与现实相反的愿望时，应该用“could”而不是“can”；“its atmosphere”中“its”指代不明，改为“the atmosphere”更准确。

× I want to pursue a masters degree in National University of Singapore.

✓ I want to pursue a master's degree at the National University of Singapore.

“masters degree”应加所有格变为“master's degree”；“in National University of Singapore”应改为“at the National University of Singapore”，并加定冠词。

× I think it is a wonderful school for do some advanced academic.

✓ I think it is a wonderful school to do some advanced academic studies.

“for do”结构错误，应改为“to do”；“advanced academic”缺少名词，补充为“advanced academic studies”使句子完整。

× I think Professor Sale is kind and have a lot of knowledge.

✓ I think Professor Sale is kind and has a lot of knowledge.

主语“Professor Sale”是第三人称单数，谓语动词应使用“has”而非“have”。