学习— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答较为自然且直接，但语法和表达上有些小错误，如“how a city developed”应为“how a city develops”，且句子稍显冗长。建议简化句子结构，使用更准确的时态和表达。

示例: I am currently a student majoring in urban and rural planning because I want to understand how cities develop and how to improve people's quality of life.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不连贯的问题，如“this it has very beautiful campus”和“the atmosphere is very there is very friendly”。建议注意句子结构，避免重复和语法错误，使表达更流畅。

示例: I study at Chongqing University, which is located in Chongqing. It has a beautiful campus and a very friendly atmosphere.

建议: 回答内容完整且结构清晰，但“studying atmosphere”表达不够地道，建议使用“study environment”或“learning atmosphere”。同时可以用连接词使句子更连贯。

示例: Yes, I think it is a good place to study because it has many modern facilities that make learning more comfortable. Moreover, the study environment is very friendly.

建议: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰，如“the place that I start”应为“the place where I study”，且句子结构混乱。建议加强语法基础，使用更准确的表达，并提供具体理由。

示例: Yes, I think the campus should make some changes because there are many old and large trees that might be dangerous.

建议: 回答表达基本清楚，但“finish my graduate study”用词不够准确，建议使用“complete my graduate studies”。句子可以更简洁自然。

示例: In the future, I hope to complete my graduate studies successfully and pursue postgraduate education abroad.

× This it has very beautiful campus and I think the atmosphere is very there is very friendly.

✓ It has a very beautiful campus and I think the atmosphere is very friendly.

句子中多余的 'This it' 导致结构混乱，应去掉 'This it'，并且 'campus' 是可数名词，前面需要加冠词 'a'。

× This it has very beautiful campus and I think the atmosphere is very there is very friendly.

✓ It has a very beautiful campus and I think the atmosphere is very friendly.

句子中 'there is very friendly' 结构错误，应改为 'is very friendly'，因为这里描述的是 atmosphere 的状态。

× Well, I think the place that I start, they need to change a lot because there are too many old and big trees that I think it may be dangerous.

✓ Well, I think the place where I study needs a lot of changes because there are too many old and big trees which I think may be dangerous.

'the place that I start' 结构不正确，应为 'the place where I study'；'they need to change a lot' 主语和谓语不一致，应改为 'needs a lot of changes'；'that I think it may be dangerous' 句子冗余，应改为 'which I think may be dangerous'。

× Well, in the future, I hope I can finish my graduate study successfully and I want to be a postgraduate abroad.

✓ Well, in the future, I hope I can finish my graduate studies successfully and I want to be a postgraduate abroad.

'graduate study' 应为复数形式 'graduate studies'，表示研究生阶段的学习。