学习— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer does not directly respond to the question. The examiner asked if you work or are a student, but you talked about completing your degree without stating your current status. Try to answer the question directly first, then add details if needed.

示例: I am currently not working as I have just completed my bachelor's degree last year from Stanford University, Bangladesh.

建议: Your answer is good but has some redundancy and minor grammatical errors. For example, 'near from my home' should be 'near my home'. Also, avoid repeating 'I chose this university' twice. Use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

示例: I completed my bachelor's degree at Stanford University, Bangladesh, located in Dhaka, the capital city. I chose this university because it offers excellent courses and modern facilities, and it is near my home.

建议: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical mistakes and some redundancy. For example, 'the Stu university has a supportive teachers' should be 'the university has supportive teachers'. Try to use linking words like 'because' and 'also' properly and avoid repeating the same idea.

示例: Yes, it is a good place to study because the university offers excellent courses and modern facilities. Also, the teachers are very supportive and always help the students.

建议: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. The sentence is not finished and contains grammatical errors. Try to clearly state what changes you want and why, using complete sentences and linking words.

示例: Yes, I would like the university to offer more programs because currently, there are not enough options for students to choose from.

建议: Your answer is relevant but has some repetition and minor grammatical errors, such as 'for my for the studies'. Try to be more concise and avoid repeating phrases. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

示例: I have completed my bachelor's degree last year, and now I plan to pursue a master's degree abroad, focusing on business programs.

× I have completed my bachelors degree last year from Stanford University, Bangladesh.

✓ I completed my bachelor's degree last year from Stanford University, Bangladesh.

The sentence refers to a completed action in the past with a specific time 'last year', so the simple past tense 'completed' is appropriate instead of present perfect 'have completed'. Also, 'bachelors' should be possessive 'bachelor's' to correctly refer to the degree.

× Additionally, the university was near from my home, so I chose this university.

✓ Additionally, the university was near my home, so I chose this university.

The preposition 'from' is incorrect after 'near'. The correct phrase is 'near my home' without 'from'.

× Also the Stu university has a supportive teachers, lecturers who always support the students.

✓ Also, the Stu university has supportive teachers and lecturers who always support the students.

The phrase 'a supportive teachers' mixes singular article 'a' with plural noun 'teachers'. It should be plural without 'a'. Also, 'teachers, lecturers' should be connected with 'and' for clarity.

× Definitely, I would like to make changes to the place where I study because I think there are still insufficient programs that which the university offers, so I think they should expand the.

✓ Definitely, I would like to make changes to the place where I study because I think there are still insufficient programs that the university offers, so I think they should expand them.

The phrase 'that which' is redundant; 'that' alone is sufficient. Also, the sentence ends abruptly; 'expand the' is incomplete and should be 'expand them' referring to 'programs'.

× I am planning to choose the business programs for my for the studies.

✓ I am planning to choose the business programs for my studies.

The phrase 'for my for the studies' is incorrect and redundant. The correct phrase is 'for my studies'.