学习— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答时语言不够自然，句子结构混乱，表达不够清晰。建议简化句子结构，直接回答问题，并用连词连接补充信息。

示例: I am both working and studying. Currently, I work at a university and I am also pursuing a doctoral degree at another university.

建议: 回答较为完整，但部分表达不够地道，且句子稍显重复。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并避免重复。

示例: I study at Sun Yat-sen University, a well-known university in Guangdong Province, China. My major is Business Administration, which is one of the university's most popular programs.

建议: 回答中出现语法错误和不完整句子，表达不清晰。建议注意语法准确性，补充具体细节，并使用连词使句子连贯。

示例: Yes, it is a great place to study because it has a beautiful campus, a large library, and many professional professors who are very helpful.

建议: 回答不连贯，表达含糊不清，缺乏具体内容。建议明确表达观点，使用完整句子，并给出具体建议。

示例: I think the university is perfect, but if I had to suggest a change, it might be to offer more courses related to local culture, since Guangzhou is famous for its rich heritage.

建议: 回答基本清楚，但用词和句式较简单，表达略显生硬。建议丰富词汇，使用更自然的表达方式。

示例: In the future, I plan to conduct research in my field by working closely with my tutor on strategic projects. Additionally, I aim to enhance my academic skills to achieve better results.

× Now I'm maybe I am also work and also a student.

✓ Now maybe I am also working and also a student.

这里'maybe'用来表示可能性，后面应该接动词的-ing形式表示正在进行的动作，'work'应改为'working'。

× Now I'm working in a university.

✓ Now I am working at a university.

介词'work'后面通常用'at'表示在某个单位工作，'in'不太合适。

× Also I am applying a doctor degree in another university.

✓ Also I am applying for a doctoral degree at another university.

动词'applying'后应接介词'for'表示申请，'doctor degree'应为'doctoral degree'，表示博士学位，'in'应改为'at'表示在某个大学。

× I'm studying in Sun Yat Sen University, which is the famous university in Guangdong Province, China.

✓ I'm studying at Sun Yat Sen University, which is a famous university in Guangdong Province, China.

表示在某个学校学习，介词应为'at'，'the famous university'改为'a famous university'更合适，因为不是唯一的著名大学。

× The most famous major in this university is Business administration and I am the student in this major.

✓ The most famous major in this university is Business Administration and I am a student in this major.

专业名称首字母应大写，'the student'改为'a student'表示其中一名学生。

× It has beautiful campus, large library and also professional professors.

✓ It has a beautiful campus, a large library, and also professional professors.

'campus'是可数名词，前面应加冠词'a'，列举多个名词时应加逗号分隔。

× In my memory the professor I is.

✓ I remember the professor.

原句结构混乱，缺少谓语，改为简单句表达记忆中的教授。

× In my memory the professor I is.

✓ I remember the professor.

'the professor I is'语序错误，主语和谓语位置颠倒，应调整为'I remember the professor'。

× I think the place is perfect, but if I need to do some other place, need to make some any change, I think maybe the content you know, it's in Guangzhou is a famous is a dialogue.

✓ I think the place is perfect, but if I need to go to some other place and make some changes, I think maybe the content, you know, is famous in Guangzhou as a dialogue.

原句连接词使用混乱，表达不清晰，需调整连接词和句子结构使其通顺。

× I plan to do some research in stated field, so I follow my tutor to study strategy and do some strategic projects.

✓ I plan to do some research in the stated field, so I follow my tutor to study strategy and do some strategic projects.

'stated field'前应加定冠词'the'表示特定领域。

× I plan to do some research in stated field, so I follow my tutor to study strategy and do some strategic projects.

✓ I plan to do some research in the stated field, so I follow my tutor to study strategy and do some strategic projects.

'in'用法正确，前面缺少定冠词'the'，已在前一条中说明。

× Also I need to improve my academic skills.

✓ Also, I need to improve my academic skills.

句首加逗号使句子更流畅，语法无大问题。