学习— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a clear and direct response with correct grammar and vocabulary. For example, start with a clear topic sentence and then add supporting details if needed.

示例: I am currently a student. I recently completed my senior secondary education in Commerce, and now I am preparing for my IELTS exam.

建议: Your answer is confusing and lacks clarity. Please respond directly to the question with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use simple and correct sentences to express where you study.

示例: I study at a well-known college in my city. It has good facilities and experienced teachers.

建议: Your answer has some good points but the sentence structure and vocabulary need improvement. Use linking words to connect ideas and correct grammar. Also, avoid redundancy and be more specific.

示例: Yes, it is a very good place to study because the teachers are experienced and supportive. Moreover, they motivate students and help them whenever they need assistance.

建议: Your answer addresses the question but is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Try to organize your ideas clearly, use linking words, and provide specific suggestions.

示例: Yes, I would like some changes. For example, the washrooms are not in good condition. They should be cleaned regularly and separate facilities for girls and boys should be provided.

建议: Your answer is confusing and contains many errors. Please give a clear and direct response about your future study plans, using correct grammar and vocabulary. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

示例: My future study plan is to pursue higher education. I am taking this speaking test as part of my preparation. I want to study business further because I have chosen commerce as my stream and I am interested in developing my knowledge in this field.

× Very recently I have completed my seniors can re education in Commerce St.

✓ Very recently I have completed my senior secondary education in Commerce stream.

The original sentence has incorrect word usage and structure. 'Seniors can re education' is unclear and incorrect. The correct phrase is 'senior secondary education' to indicate completion of higher secondary studies. Also, 'Commerce St.' should be 'Commerce stream'. The present perfect tense 'have completed' is appropriate here as the action was completed recently.

× Now I have preparing from my Isles exam.

✓ Now I am preparing for my IELTS exam.

The phrase 'have preparing' is incorrect. The correct form is 'am preparing' to indicate the present continuous tense. Also, 'from my Isles exam' is incorrect; it should be 'for my IELTS exam' as 'prepare for' is the correct prepositional phrase and 'IELTS' is the correct exam name.

× Will I have the I have recently completed education an I have study in good thing but other College in this war.

✓ I have recently completed my education and I am studying at a good college in this area.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and confusing. 'Will I have the' is incorrect and unnecessary. 'I have study' should be 'I am studying' to indicate current action. 'Good thing but other College in this war' is unclear; corrected to 'a good college in this area' for clarity and correctness.

× Far, deep in Italy it is.

✓ It is located far, deep in Italy.

The original sentence is awkward and unclear. The correction clarifies the location. However, if the student meant to say 'far, deep in the city' or 'far, deep in the area', it should be specified. Also, 'Italy' may be incorrect if the context is different; assuming the student meant a place in Italy.

× Very good place to to study as the teachers of that college was experienced.

✓ It is a very good place to study as the teachers of that college are experienced.

The phrase 'to to study' has a repeated 'to'. Also, 'teachers was experienced' is incorrect; 'teachers' is plural, so the verb should be 'are'. Present tense 'are' is appropriate to describe the current state.

× Moreover, they are also motivated and sport children's whenever the child is in need.

✓ Moreover, they are also motivated and support children whenever a child is in need.

'Sport children's' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'support' and 'children's' should be 'children' (plural noun, no apostrophe). Also, 'the child' is better as 'a child' to generalize the statement.

× Yes, I like several changes where I have studied.

✓ Yes, I would like several changes in the place where I have studied.

The original sentence lacks clarity. 'I like several changes' should be 'I would like several changes' to express desire. Also, 'where I have studied' needs 'in the place' for clarity.

× First of all, the washrooms of that place are not active very good conditions.

✓ First of all, the washrooms of that place are not in very good condition.

'Not active very good conditions' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'not in very good condition' to describe the state of the washrooms.

× I suggest them to improve like they have to make their separate girls and vice versa and moreover there should be need.

✓ I suggest they improve by making separate washrooms for girls and boys, and moreover, there is a need for better facilities.

The original sentence is confusing and ungrammatical. 'Like they have to make their separate girls and vice versa' is unclear; corrected to 'making separate washrooms for girls and boys'. 'There should be need' is incomplete; corrected to 'there is a need for better facilities'.

× Well, my purchase study plan is to post failure for my higher education.

✓ Well, my future study plan is to pursue further education for my higher studies.

'Purchase study plan' is incorrect; it should be 'future study plan'. 'Post failure' is incorrect; likely intended 'postgraduate' or 'pursue further'. Corrected to 'pursue further education' to express future intention.

× That's why I'm here.

✓ That's why I'm here.

This sentence is correct and needs no correction.

× Do give my speaking test and moreover I want to do business because I choose commerce stream in which I study business studies and further I will also take a subject regarding business to develop.

✓ I am taking my speaking test and moreover, I want to do business because I chose the commerce stream in which I study business studies. Further, I will also take subjects related to business to develop my skills.

'Do give my speaking test' is incorrect; corrected to 'I am taking my speaking test'. 'Choose' should be past tense 'chose' as the decision was made in the past. 'Take a subject regarding business to develop' is vague; clarified to 'take subjects related to business to develop my skills'.