学习— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to give a clear and concise answer with correct grammar and avoid hesitations. For example, say "I graduated from college one year ago, and now I work at Sam's Club, which is a company owned by Walmart."

示例: I graduated from college one year ago, and now I work at Sam's Club, which is a company owned by Walmart.

建议: Use correct verb forms and clearer sentences. Also, avoid unclear phrases like "didn't feel child." Try: "I usually study in the library because I can concentrate better there. It gives me energy to learn new things, and I find it an enjoyable experience."

示例: I usually study in the library because I can concentrate better there. It gives me energy to learn new things, and I find it an enjoyable experience.

建议: Make your answer more coherent and complete. For example, say "Yes, it's a good place to study because it has coffee, comfortable lighting, and a quiet environment where I can concentrate."

示例: Yes, it's a good place to study because it has coffee, comfortable lighting, and a quiet environment where I can concentrate.

建议: Your answer is unclear and off-topic. Focus on specific changes you want in the study place. For example, "Yes, I would like the library to have more comfortable chairs and better lighting to improve my study experience."

示例: Yes, I would like the library to have more comfortable chairs and better lighting to improve my study experience.

建议: Try to organize your ideas clearly and use correct vocabulary. For example, "I want to improve my English skills, learn more about computer programming, and develop better communication skills to enhance my teamwork."

示例: I want to improve my English skills, learn more about computer programming, and develop better communication skills to enhance my teamwork.

× I'm working and I graduate from college for one year.

✓ I have been working and I graduated from college one year ago.

The original sentence incorrectly uses the present tense 'graduate' for a past event. Since the graduation happened in the past and the working is ongoing, the present perfect continuous 'have been working' and simple past 'graduated' are appropriate.

× And now I'm working on Sam's Club, which is.

✓ And now I'm working at Sam's Club, which is...

The preposition 'on' is incorrect when referring to working at a company or place. The correct preposition is 'at' to indicate employment location.

× Oh. Sigh. Company from Walmart.

✓ It is a subsidiary company of Walmart.

The original fragment is incomplete and unclear. A complete sentence clarifies the relationship between Sam's Club and Walmart.

× Well, I usually studying library because I think is a place where I can.

✓ Well, I usually study in the library because I think it is a place where I can...

The verb 'studying' should be in the simple present tense 'study' to match the adverb 'usually'. Also, the preposition 'in' is needed before 'the library', and the subject 'it' is missing before 'is'.

× Well, I usually studying library because I think is a place where I can.

✓ Well, I usually study in the library because I think it is a place where I can...

The definite article 'the' is required before 'library' to specify the place.

× Concentrates and. Didn't feel child.

✓ concentrate and don't feel tired.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Concentrate' should be in base form after 'can', and 'didn't feel child' is incorrect; likely intended to express not feeling tired or distracted.

× I feel energy to learn new things and it's a very experimental, very enjoyable experience for me.

✓ I feel energized to learn new things and it's a very exciting, very enjoyable experience for me.

'Feel energy' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'feel energized'. Also, 'experimental' is not appropriate here; 'exciting' fits better.

× Yeah, I think it's a good space for sorry it has coffee, had some comfort for light and.

✓ Yeah, I think it's a good space because it has coffee, comfortable lighting, and...

The phrase 'for sorry' is incorrect and unclear. 'Because' is appropriate to explain reasons. 'Had some comfort for light' is incorrect; 'comfortable lighting' is correct.

× The common comfortable. Involvements to sorry. And I can concentrate on.

✓ The common comfortable environment helps me concentrate.

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. A complete sentence clarifies the meaning.

× Yes. OK, except it goes I think.

✓ Yes. OK, except for the noise, I think...

The phrase 'except it goes' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'except for' to indicate an exception.

× Change is the. New experience for me is very. Surprising.

✓ Change is a new experience for me and is very surprising.

The original sentences are fragmented. Combining them into a complete sentence improves clarity.

× Hiking I love.

✓ I love hiking.

The word order is incorrect. The subject 'I' should come before the verb 'love'.

× The new things that's surrounding me has changed.

✓ The new things that are surrounding me have changed.

'That's' is a contraction for 'that is' which is singular, but 'things' is plural, so 'that are' is correct. Also, 'has' should be 'have' to agree with plural subject.

× OK, I want to improve my English skills and learn more computing.

✓ OK, I want to improve my English skills and learn more about computing.

The phrase 'learn more computing' is incomplete; 'learn more about computing' is correct.

× Pro programming. Scuse and how to communicate with other people.

✓ Programming, coding, and how to communicate with other people.

'Pro programming' and 'Scuse' are unclear or incorrect. Likely intended 'programming' and 'coding'. Also, 'and how to communicate' is part of the list.

× Which we improve. My team works.

✓ which will improve my teamwork.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Team works' should be 'teamwork', and 'which will improve' correctly connects the clause.