学习— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答时应避免重复和语法错误，表达应更自然流畅。可以简洁明了地介绍自己是学生，学校和专业。

示例: I'm a law student at Macau University of Science and Technology.

建议: 回答时应注意语法和句子连贯性，避免断句不完整。可以用连接词使表达更流畅。

示例: I study law at Macau University of Science and Technology because I want to become a lawyer in the future.

建议: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不连贯。应使用完整句子并用连接词连接观点和理由。

示例: Of course. Although some people say the school is not very good, I think it has helped me a lot, especially in my major and improving my English.

建议: 回答时应避免断句过短，注意语法和连贯性。可以用连接词更好地表达原因和结果。

示例: Definitely. I like this place because Macau is a big city with many foreigners, so I can improve my English by communicating with them.

建议: 回答不完整且语法错误较多，应使用完整句子并清晰表达未来计划。

示例: I plan to continue my studies in the United States, focusing on law, so I am currently preparing for that.

× My school is Macau University of Science and Technology and I'm a. Law student.

✓ My school is Macau University of Science and Technology and I'm a law student.

这里“a. Law student”中的句点使用错误，应该是“a law student”，表示“我是一个法律专业的学生”。句点的错误导致句子不连贯。

× My school name is McCall University of Science and Technology.

✓ My school's name is Macau University of Science and Technology.

“My school name”应改为“my school's name”，表示“我学校的名字”。另外，学校名称应为“Macau University of Science and Technology”，而非“McCall”。

× I choose this major. Is that I want to be a lawyer in the future.

✓ I chose this major because I want to be a lawyer in the future.

原句中“Is that I want to be a lawyer in the future”结构不完整且不通顺，应改为“because I want to be a lawyer in the future”，表示原因。

× Although lots of people say this school is. Not to good.

✓ Although lots of people say this school is not too good.

“Not to good”应为“not too good”，这里“too”是副词，表示“太”，而“to”是介词，使用错误。

× But in my opinion I still. A great that this. School helped me a lot.

✓ But in my opinion, I still think this school has helped me a lot.

原句断句错误且缺少谓语，应补充“think”作为谓语，使句子完整通顺。

× Such as in my major. Such as in my English level.

✓ For example, in my major and in my English level.

“Such as”用法不当，通常用于列举，句首用“for example”更合适，且应连接两个方面。

× I can improve my English level. Through Communicate with foreigners.

✓ I can improve my English level through communicating with foreigners.

“Through Communicate”中“Communicate”应为动名词“communicating”，表示“通过与外国人交流”。

× Well, I want to study further. In United States.

✓ Well, I want to study further in the United States.

“In United States”缺少冠词“the”，应为“in the United States”，且应与前句合并更自然。

× And I also want to study at the law in America.

✓ And I also want to study law in America.

“study at the law”结构错误，应为“study law”，表示“学习法律”。

× So now I'm learning else.

✓ So now I'm learning other things.

“learning else”表达不正确，应使用“other things”表示“其他东西”。