学习— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn khá rõ ràng nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và phát âm cần cải thiện. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và chính xác hơn, ví dụ như 'I am currently studying in 12th grade and preparing for my university entrance exam.'

示例: I am currently studying in 12th grade and preparing for my university entrance exam.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến người nghe khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và sắp xếp ý hợp lý. Ví dụ: 'I study at a high school in Hawaii, which is very close to my house. It is well-known for its good reputation and quality education.'

示例: I study at a high school in Hawaii, which is very close to my house. It is well-known for its good reputation and quality education.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa bị mơ hồ. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp và sử dụng các liên từ để làm rõ ý. Ví dụ: 'Yes, I would definitely say it is a good place to study because the school is popular for its high-quality education and strict rules that help students focus.'

示例: Yes, I would definitely say it is a good place to study because the school is popular for its high-quality education and strict rules that help students focus.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tốt nhưng cấu trúc câu và ngữ pháp chưa chính xác. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và rõ ràng hơn, ví dụ: 'Yes, I would like some changes because the school is very strict and has some unnecessary rules. I think reducing these rules would improve the environment.'

示例: Yes, I would like some changes because the school is very strict and has some unnecessary rules. I think reducing these rules would improve the environment.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng rõ ràng nhưng cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt. Bạn nên nói: 'I plan to study harder and focus on English. Also, I will take the entrance exam to get into a good university in Hanoi.'

示例: I plan to study harder and focus on English. Also, I will take the entrance exam to get into a good university in Hanoi.

× I am studying my 12th grade right now an I'm preparing for my exam to go for the university.

✓ I am studying my 12th grade right now and I'm preparing for my exam to go to university.

The sentence contains a typo 'an' which should be 'and' to connect the two clauses properly. Also, 'go for the university' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'go to university' when referring to attending university in general.

× Ask daddy at a high school that cold in Hawaii and is located on. Very near my house and it's very popular for the name and also the qualities of the school provided.

✓ I study at a high school that is called in Hawaii and is located very near my house. It's very popular for its name and also the qualities the school provides.

The original sentence has multiple preposition errors: 'Ask daddy at a high school' should be 'I study at a high school'; 'that cold' should be 'that is called'; 'located on' should be 'located'; 'popular for the name' should be 'popular for its name'; 'qualities of the school provided' should be 'qualities the school provides'. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I was definitely say it yes, send the school is very popular for it, uh, for its quality, as well as at the education that is bring the bring out also the rules that make us.

✓ I would definitely say yes, since the school is very popular for its quality, as well as the education it provides and the rules that guide us.

The original sentence has several structural errors: 'I was definitely say it yes' should be 'I would definitely say yes'; 'send' should be 'since'; 'for it, uh, for its quality' is redundant and unclear; 'education that is bring the bring out' is incorrect and should be 'education it provides'; 'rules that make us' is incomplete and should be 'rules that guide us'. These corrections make the sentence grammatically correct and clearer.

× Definitely, yes, maybe because I think that my school of very straits right now and they have various rules that unnecessary. So I think that, uh, reduce the unnecessary rules on will make.

✓ Definitely, yes, maybe because I think that my school is very strict right now and they have various unnecessary rules. So I think that reducing the unnecessary rules will help.

The sentence has preposition and word choice errors: 'my school of very straits' should be 'my school is very strict'; 'rules that unnecessary' should be 'unnecessary rules'; 'reduce the unnecessary rules on will make' is incomplete and should be 'reducing the unnecessary rules will help'. These corrections improve grammar and clarity.

× I think that I will study harder and focus on English. As well as that I outset test to get into some university that have a good quality in Hanoi.

✓ I think that I will study harder and focus on English. Also, I will take the entrance test to get into a university that has good quality in Hanoi.

The original sentence has tense and word choice errors: 'I outset test' is incorrect and should be 'I will take the entrance test'; 'some university that have' should be 'a university that has' to agree in number; 'good quality' is better phrased as 'good quality university'. These corrections align the sentence with proper future tense and subject-verb agreement.