学习— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答不够自然，语法和表达存在错误，建议使用完整句子并清晰表达身份和未来计划。

示例: I am currently a university student studying medicine in Guangzhou. In the future, I hope to build a successful career in the medical field.

建议: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清，建议直接回答问题，使用连贯句子并提供具体细节。

示例: I study at Nielsen University, which is a well-known and beautiful college in China. It has many excellent professors with strong academic backgrounds, especially in medicine.

建议: 回答较为简短且有语法错误，建议使用连贯句子并详细说明学校的优点。

示例: Yes, it is a great place to study. Since I am a graduate student, I have fewer classes and spend most of my time conducting experiments in well-equipped laboratories that support my research.

建议: 回答表达不清且语法错误较多，建议使用完整句子，清晰描述问题并提出具体建议。

示例: Yes, I would like some changes. The hospital where we work is far from the school, and it takes me two hours to commute every day. I think the school should provide more accommodations to make it easier for students like me.

建议: 回答中断句不当，表达不够流畅，建议使用连贯句子清晰描述未来计划。

示例: I plan to complete my research in basic medicine. After that, I hope to graduate and either continue my studies or start working in the medical field.

× Under student UN currently starting medicine in Guangzhou.

✓ I am currently a student studying medicine in Guangzhou.

原句结构混乱，缺少主语和谓语，导致句子不完整。应补充主语和谓语，使句子完整通顺。

× Do you study? Ann studying so Nielsen University.

✓ I study at Nielsen University.

原句中“Do you study?”是疑问句，且“Ann studying so Nielsen University”语法错误且含义不明，应改为陈述句并正确使用代词和动词形式。

× It's a famous and the beautiful College in China.

✓ It's a famous and beautiful college in China.

“the beautiful College”中“the”使用不当，形容词前不需要定冠词，且college应小写。

× And school provide at once equipment for me supporting my research work.

✓ And the school provides all the equipment I need to support my research work.

主语“school”是单数，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式“provides”。

× There, a long distance between the school and hospital, we work.

✓ There is a long distance between the school and the hospital where we work.

原句缺少动词“is”，且“hospital”前应加定冠词“the”，使句子完整且语法正确。

× Soul. Every day it takes 2 hours to go to the hospital.

✓ Every day, it takes 2 hours to go to the hospital.

“Soul.”无意义，应删除。句子中“it”指代明确，语法正确。

× And I think schools should provide more accommodations for students like me. And make it easier.

✓ I think schools should provide more accommodations for students like me to make it easier.

句子中“and make it easier”缺少主语，应该与前句合并，使用不定式表达目的。

× After finishing that. I hope to graduate from my school and pursue other ones studies or work in the future.

✓ After finishing that, I hope to graduate from my school and pursue other studies or work in the future.

“After finishing that.”是不完整的句子，应与后句合并；“other ones studies”中“ones”多余，应删除。