服装— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more grammatically accurate and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one brief reason and one specific example. Avoid repetition and use correct noun/verb forms (e.g., "I like to wear casual and sporty clothes because they are comfortable").

示例: I like to wear casual and sporty clothes because they are comfortable and easy to move in. For example, I often choose jeans and a sweatshirt when I go out with friends because they keep me relaxed all day.

建议: Give a direct answer followed by two coherent reasons, using linking words to connect ideas. Avoid filler words and vague phrases like "very unique" and unfinished sentences. Use vocabulary that matches the context (e.g., "comfortable," "practical").

示例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes rather than smart clothes because they are more practical for my daily routine and help me feel relaxed. For instance, I usually wear trainers and a hoodie when studying or meeting friends because they let me move freely and focus better.

建议: Answer directly and give a specific reason or example. Correct grammar ("I disagree/agree," "T-shirts are old-fashioned"). Avoid referring to the examiner and unclear words; clarify what alternatives you mean. Keep it to one or two supporting sentences.

示例: I don’t often wear plain T-shirts because I find them a bit old-fashioned; I prefer more modern tops like button-down shirts or casual dresses. For example, last week I bought a patterned shirt that looks smarter and more interesting than a plain T-shirt.

建议: Use correct tense and concise phrasing. State frequency or typical behaviour, then give a specific example with accurate time expressions. Avoid repetition and incorrect prepositions (use "spent time choosing" not "to choosing").

示例: Yes, I often spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I like to find items that suit me. For example, last weekend I spent about five hours at the market looking for a summer dress and a few T-shirts that fit well.

建议: Give a clear distinction between weekdays and weekends with specific examples. Use correct vocabulary (e.g., "weekdays I wear smart-casual to work; weekends I wear relaxed outfits") and avoid unfinished sentences.

示例: Yes. On weekdays I usually wear smart-casual clothes like chinos and a shirt for work, while on weekends I dress more casually, for example jeans and a T-shirt when meeting friends or relaxing at home.

建议: Mention colours and explain clearly why you like them using simple, correct expressions. Replace unclear phrases with concrete feelings or effects (e.g., "bright colours cheer me up"). Limit to two supporting sentences.

示例: I prefer bright colours like pink, yellow and orange because they cheer me up and make me feel energetic. For example, wearing a yellow top in the morning usually improves my mood and helps me start the day positively.

× Actually I like wear casual and sport because I think I feel comfortable for these types.

✓ Actually I like wearing casual and sporty clothes because I feel comfortable in these styles.

After 'like' use verb+ing (gerund). 'Sport' should be adjective 'sporty' describing clothes. Use 'clothes' plural and 'in these styles' instead of 'for these types' for natural phrasing.

× So yes, I like to wear this clothes.

✓ So yes, I like to wear these clothes.

Use plural demonstrative 'these' with plural noun 'clothes' (not 'this'). Also omit unnecessary 'to' after 'like' when followed by verb+ing or rephrase to 'I like to wear' but then use 'these'.

× I prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes instead of smart clothes because I feel more comfortable and I feel, uh, very excited because I think it is very unique and it is very special for us.

✓ I prefer wearing comfortable and casual clothes instead of smart clothes because I feel more comfortable and excited; I think they are unique and special to me.

Use gerund 'wearing' or 'prefer to wear' consistently. Repeated 'I feel' is redundant; combine. 'It' should refer to 'clothes' (plural) so use 'they'. 'For us' changed to 'to me' to match speaker perspective.

× Umm, actually I like to.

✓ Umm, actually I do.

Fragment lacking verb/complement. Use 'I do' to complete thought if agreeing with previous sentence or say 'I like that' to be specific.

× No, because I think it is old style because umm, last week my brother say the T-shirt is very old.

✓ No, because I think it's out of style; last week my brother said the T-shirt was very old.

Use past tense 'said' for reported speech. 'It is old style' is awkward; 'out of style' is natural. Maintain tense consistency.

× And I think I am agree with your opinion because now we have a lot of types, uh, for example, we have address.

✓ And I think I agree with his opinion because now we have many styles; for example, we have different designs.

'I am agree' is incorrect—use 'I agree'. 'Your opinion' should reflect who was speaking; here refer to brother so 'his opinion'. 'Types' better 'styles' and 'address' unclear—use 'designs' or 'styles'.

× Yes, I spent a lot of time to choosing to to to choosing clothes yesterday.

✓ Yes, I spent a lot of time choosing clothes yesterday.

After 'spent time' use verb+ing, not 'to choosing'. Remove repeated words. 'Spent' is correct past tense.

× I want to market to choose some clothes because I want to purchasing T-shirt dresses and some T-shirt for me.

✓ I went to the market to choose some clothes because I wanted to purchase T-shirts and a T-shirt dress for me.

Use past tense 'went'/'wanted' to match 'yesterday'. 'Market' needs 'went to the market'. 'Purchasing' should be infinitive 'purchase' or past 'purchase(d)'. Use plural 'T-shirts' and 'a T-shirt dress'.

× So I spend maybe for five hour in this.

✓ So I spent maybe five hours on that.

Use past tense 'spent'. Use plural 'hours' and remove 'for' before time; use 'on that' or 'doing that'.

× Actually, yes, I wear different styles of clothes on weekends and weekdays.

✓ Actually, yes, I wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and weekends.

Order of 'weekdays and weekends' is conventional but not strictly grammatical; main issue is fine. This correction keeps present simple for habitual action.

× In weekend I wear casual and formal clothes, but in weekday I will support style and fashion style because I spend my time with my.

✓ On weekends I wear casual clothes, and on weekdays I wear more fashionable styles because I spend time with friends.

Use 'on weekends/on weekdays'. 'Support style and fashion style' unclear—use 'more fashionable styles'. Sentence fragment 'with my' incomplete; clarify with 'friends' or appropriate noun.

× I prefer pink, yellow, orange. I like this color.

✓ I prefer pink, yellow, and orange. I like these colors.

'These colors' matches plural list. Add 'and' before last item in list for clarity.

× It is give me the Bashan, give me the give me to fill in a good mood.

✓ They make me feel happy and uplifted.

Original is ungrammatical. Use 'make me feel' + adjective. Remove unclear word 'Bashan' and repetitive phrasing.

× It is help me to see the world in big.

✓ They help me see the world more positively.

Use plural 'they' to refer to colors. 'Help me see' without 'to' is common. 'In big' incorrect—use 'more positively' or 'in a bigger way' depending on meaning.