服装— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Give a concise topic sentence and one or two clear supporting details. Correct grammar (singular/plural and word forms) and avoid redundancy. For example, say why dresses suit you and in which situations you wear them.

示例: I usually wear dresses because they look nice and make me feel confident. For example, I wear light cotton dresses for university since they are comfortable and easy to move in.

建议: Answer directly with a topic sentence, then give a reason using correct sentence structure and avoid repeated words. Use a linking word to connect your reason.

示例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they help me focus on my work. For instance, wearing soft jeans and a T‑shirt makes me feel relaxed and confident during long classes.

建议: Start with a clear topic sentence, use singular/plural agreement (they/them for T‑shirts), and avoid repetition. Add a specific example of how you style T‑shirts.

示例: Yes, I like wearing T‑shirts because they are comfortable and versatile. For example, I often pair a plain white T‑shirt with blue jeans or a skirt for a simple, neat look.

建议: Provide a clear topic sentence and one specific reason without fragmented phrases. Use linking words (for example, so) and correct verb forms. Mention a routine to illustrate your point.

示例: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes because I usually wake up late for my classes. So I pick simple outfits like a T‑shirt and jeans to save time.

建议: Give a clear contrast with a linking word (whereas/on the other hand) and correct repetition. Be specific about occasions and examples for each time.

示例: Yes. On weekdays I usually wear simple T‑shirts and jeans for classes because they are comfortable, whereas on weekends I prefer dresses when I meet friends since they look nicer for going out.

建议: State your preference in one sentence and give specific reasons or situations. Avoid repeating words and correct expressions like 'calm' and 'all the time'.

示例: My favourite colour is blue, so I often choose blue dresses, T‑shirts and jeans. I find blue calming, especially when I need to relax before classes or study.

× I like to wear dresses in my daily life because it looks beautiful which can bring me confident.

✓ I like to wear dresses in my daily life because they look beautiful and can make me feel confident.

The singular pronoun 'it' does not agree with the plural noun 'dresses'. Use 'they' for plural. Also 'bring me confident' is incorrect phrasing; use 'make me feel confident'. Suggestion: match pronouns to noun number and use 'make someone feel + adjective' for emotions.

× In my opinion, I prefer to wear comfortable clothes because because. Confidence to me is very important.

✓ In my opinion, I prefer to wear comfortable clothes because comfort is very important to me.

There is a repeated word 'because because' and an incomplete sentence 'Confidence to me is very important' that sounds unnatural. Combine ideas into one clear sentence: state the reason ('because comfort is very important to me'). Suggestion: avoid repetition and restructure for clarity.

× Actually, I like to wear T-shirts because it is comfortable and besides it it suits, it suits nearly every kind of trousers such as jeans.

✓ Actually, I like to wear T-shirts because they are comfortable and they suit nearly every kind of trousers, such as jeans.

T-shirts is plural, so use 'they are' not 'it is'. Also avoid repeating words; use commas for clarity. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement and remove duplicate words.

× Actually, I don't have so much time to choose clothes because I always stay. I always wake up late to catch up my classes, so I don't have such a large amount of time to decide what to will.

✓ Actually, I don't have much time to choose clothes because I always wake up late to catch my classes, so I don't have enough time to decide what to wear.

'so much time' should be 'much time' in negative contexts; 'I always stay' is incomplete and should be removed; 'catch up my classes' is incorrect—use 'catch my classes' or 'get to my classes'; 'what to will' is wrong; use 'what to wear'. Suggestion: simplify sentences, use 'much' with negatives, and correct verb collocations ('catch classes', 'wear').

× Yes, on weekdays I need to take some courses, so I will I will simple T-shirts and jeans for example. And at weekends I often meet with friends to go outside, so I will dresses because it looks pretty.

✓ Yes, on weekdays I need to attend some courses, so I usually wear simple T-shirts and jeans. At weekends I often meet friends and go out, so I wear dresses because they look pretty.

Repeated phrases 'I will I will' and incorrect use of future 'will' for habitual actions; 'take some courses' is acceptable but 'attend' is more natural; 'it looks pretty' mismatches plural 'dresses'—use 'they look pretty'. Suggestion: use 'usually' for habits and present simple ('wear'), remove repetitions, and ensure pronoun agreement.

× My favorite color is blue, so I always wear blue, blue, blue blue clothes such as blue dresses or blue T-shirts and jeans, jeans, jeans are also blue. It makes me calm down in every at every time.

✓ My favorite color is blue, so I usually wear blue clothes, such as blue dresses or blue T-shirts and blue jeans. Wearing blue makes me feel calm all the time.

Repeated words like 'blue, blue, blue' and 'jeans, jeans, jeans' are unnecessary. 'It makes me calm down in every at every time' is ungrammatical; use 'Wearing blue makes me feel calm all the time' or 'at any time'. Suggestion: avoid repetition for emphasis, use 'wearing' as subject for the effect, and use natural time expressions like 'all the time' or 'anytime'.